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Poetry by Jesus Christ

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She sits there in the aisle
I want to make her smile
But I'm scared she might be bile
So I hide like a reptile...
when its raining.

I hide for awhile
Sitting on cold tiles
Feeling as if in exile
I play snake on my mobile..
phone.


thanks i've been working on this one for about 4 months
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Re: Poetry by Jesus Christ

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i like the way you found so many freaking words to rhyme with aisle. XD!

you shoulda went to talk to her! D:

you should have thrown vile in there somewhere too. >.> or pile! =D! ......yeah, pile. <3
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yes. im sure if i could b bothered i could compile a mile of words rhyming in that same style but if i do im sure i'll go insane and senile so i might just stop here with my freestyle.
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You're cool. xDD
Decisions to decisions are made and not bought, but I thought this wouldn't hurt a lot. I guess not.
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not really
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Jesus Christ wrote:yes. im sure if i could b bothered i could compile a mile of words rhyming in that same style but if i do im sure i'll go insane and senile so i might just stop here with my freestyle.
your use of "pile" right here was awesome. 8)
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