tile: Dawn of love
sometimes I weep when you look into my eyes.
causing me to think where you want me tryly or not.
I spend my lonely time alone on a hill at dawn.
I feel alone when your not there in my heart,
why do you wanna leave me behind
should I move on or shall I stay here waiting for your love to come back.
till the day od dawn I will wait till the day I will have my love in my heart.
Another poem!;)
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- Absolute Otaku
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re: Another poem!;)
I liked it. I Know its just a poem but you shouldent wait forever for someone to love you.
You have to make youre move also.
You have to make youre move also.
Someday... No matter how cold it is now... ...The snow will melt. Without fail. Whithout fail.-Hatori
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- Visitor
re: Another poem!;)
Yeah. Even though it is a poem, if you're waiting for love, then just try and get to know people better and someone will surely turn up one day that's just right for you.
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- Mobile Suit Otaku
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re: Another poem!;)
nice poem...i like it
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- Absolute Otaku
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Re: re: Another poem!;)
I think she's refering to Yasashii's poem.shinzoluverneo1 wrote:Thank you, Darker Angel.
Someday... No matter how cold it is now... ...The snow will melt. Without fail. Whithout fail.-Hatori
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- Uber Otaku
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re: Another poem!;)
Your a natural at writing poems.
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