Another story for those who enjoyed the first

[Aoi Sakuraba]

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[scorpionwarrior]

WOW, Excellent detail. It's great, you seem to have a talent that makes people want to read all of it.

[Aoi Sakuraba]

thanks Mat

[Symos]

Again nicely done.

[Kaoru Hanabishi]

WOW, Excellent detail. It's great, you seem to have a talent that makes people want to read all of it.

ypu aoi chan is really good with writting, is so good and has so much realism in it that it makes you feel you sitting there at the side watching... (wishes) She's really talented in writting, and we should all encourage her to write more

[Aoi Sakuraba]

Thanks for the compliments, but I really don't think I'm very good at this

[The Brown-Eyed Boy]

how old are you???....im jealous of your talent. you should find someone to sponser you or something........i so want your talent............i support you 100%

[Aoi Sakuraba]

I'm 21, and I doubt anyone would sponsor like this

[Pennyroyal Tea]

Not bad, I liked it better than the first one.

[Aoi Sakuraba]

Thanks Andre

[The Brown-Eyed Boy]

if you keep getting better, someone will like your talent. Then you can end up similar to Shigure from Fruits Basket.......just dont treat your editor the same.

[Coin~operated Boy<3]

ok im gay and i liked it! very cute and romantic. your talents could take you far if you aplied them corectly.

[Aoi Sakuraba]

thanks Coin that means alot to me to have a compliment from you (since you don't like girls it makes me feel good that you liked it)

[scorpionwarrior]

I'm 21, and I doubt anyone would sponsor like this

Don't doubt the possible