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posted again cuz the one i posted a few years ago got deleted somehow. ;.; remember, you cannot laugh at me due to this silliness. this was years ago. XD! i've gotten better at writing....i think. >.>

Immortal (10-2-05)

To be called human is an insult. I no longer shall go by that title. From now on, I am immortal. I no longer wish to be as humans, constrained by boundaries as though condemned to reside within a single room. four walls, a celing, and a floor. Living inside a box for all eternity. As an immortal, that couldn't be me. I could not be condemned to a single box. I would be outside the box therefore surpassing the limits of that of a mere human. I would wander admist the boundless space occupied by all other immortals. Humans within this space is unhard of. They cannot survive because once again, they are constrained by the limitations and bpoundaries of their kind. Not me. Being immortal, I would have no problem surviving in the space outside the box limiting humans. They would yearn to be outside the box. They would reek of jealousy and envy for those not constrained by the limits that they are forced to suffer through. I feel sorry for them. Limited by the never ending boundaries of the human race. Doomed to forever remain inside a box that they have no hope of being released from. I feel guilty for having been released from the pain they are forced to endure. I wish I could relinquish them all from such limits, such boundaries, such constraints, such humanity. But this is a task most impossible. For to relinquish all humans from humanity and turn them immortals is beyond the power given to me. But while I am still here, and I am still immortal, not one can call me human.
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY it still rules *hugs*
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So true.
Decisions to decisions are made and not bought, but I thought this wouldn't hurt a lot. I guess not.
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*hugs spikey* thanx spike and pimp.
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