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Please Read and Critque :D

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http://goldenwolf18.deviantart.com/art/ ... -105512049 - Part 1

http://goldenwolf18.deviantart.com/art/ ... -105569564 - Part 2

http://goldenwolf18.deviantart.com/art/ ... -106221425 - Part 3

http://goldenwolf18.deviantart.com/art/ ... -106909758 - Part 4

http://goldenwolf18.deviantart.com/art/ ... -109784369 - Part 5

Please tell me what you think. Part 3 will be uploaded before Saturday. If you wish to read it then I will post the link here as well!!
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i'll read it on the weekend... but a general synopsis would be good ^_^
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Urp I'm not good at Synopsis'

Erm

A bunch of 18 year olds are driven to a mysterious school by their parents in the middle of nowhere and dropped off with out a word. They don't know what they are learning, or why they are even there. They have a strange teacher, in a strange classroom with a large pentacle on the floor.
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Part 3 up
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Thats was an awesome story! You almost made it seem real and you gave great detail on the characters. You also had humor in there, which is a plus.

I loved it. =D>
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Wow thank you so much X3 Part 4 coming up Saturday!

I'm so glad you liked it, that makes me happy!
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Your welcome. I'm glad I can make you happy. XD
*I can't wait to read part 4*
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Hehehehe :D *does a happy dance*
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ZOMG PART 4 YUSH

http://goldenwolf18.deviantart.com/art/ ... -106909758
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part 5 up
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