Title:A Vampire's Wish
The shadow takes form
Here in my mind
Everywhere you look there is darkness
Shadows surrounding even my dreams
Have I no salvation?
A vampire's prayers won't be answered
Demons claw at my soul
Oh I wish I was mortal again
Why did it have to be me?
I wish to be humanonce again
Shadows surround me
My life shall pass through eternity
Eons will pass and I shall live on.
What do you think?
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Here's a vampire poem
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tsubame_03
- Visitor
re: Here's a vampire poem
me like it! the hidden message is kinda easy to see... i haven't read the 3rd line yet and i saw it already... good job! 
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Angel of Music
- Visitor
re: Here's a vampire poem
Thanks! I didn't know if anybody would get it that fast. That was good that you got it so fast. Have you read those kinds of poems before?
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tsubame_03
- Visitor
re: Here's a vampire poem
those kinds of poems are called "acrostics"... we learned it in our Filipino class.... if you don't know acrostics then it would take time to figure it out...
we learned it in our Filipino class.... if you don't know acrostics then it would take time to figure it out... -
Angel of Music
- Visitor
re: Here's a vampire poem
Oh. I forgot what it was called. I was just writing cause I was bored, I wasn't really paying any attention to what I was writing until I read it through once.
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*Flamekisser*
- Mobile Suit Otaku
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re: Here's a vampire poem
that was really good, i love vampires!!! 
"It's just the sort of mind I've got. A butterfly mind that flits from one thing to another."
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