My gerbil Manga

[Crystalbear]

I'm posting a script for it... right here.

Hope you injoy it.

Italics are thoughts. Bolds are actions.

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Scroll 1: Blade of Stars

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We see a grey gerbil walking in a forest. His right ear is bitten off and he has a scratch mark on his left cheeck. He wears a red kimono

Gerbil: Stops in front of a sword in the ground Ah, the Blade of Stars. So long have I been searching for you. Thy villagers say that ye are the most... strongest sword of them all.

Reaches to grabs it, but gets blasted by a purple light from it

Gerbil: So thy legend is true. Ye can only accept pure of hearted. It doesen't matter...

Quickly ties a red marble around it

Gerbil: Thy stone of blood... with it.. it cancles all spells.

Quickly pulls it out

Manga window now shows the sword hung up in a vilager house wall

In another manga window, we see an old gerbil sitting while talking to a young brown gerbil

Old Gerbil: Aiko, ye must accept the family harloom. I have found the blade of stars 40 years ago. I passed it down to your father. Now that he's dead, I must pass it down to you.

Aiko (brown gerbil): Grandpa, I have no care for a sword. Nothing has ever attacked the village before. Besides, we have plenty of warriors here.

Old Gerbil (Aiko's grandpa): Sighs Ye must execpt thy un-execpted Aiko...

Aiko: Fine, I will. Gets up But that dosen't mean I'm going to own a sword. Walks out

Grandpa: Sighs He's just like his father...

Scene changes to Aiko walking to a castle

Aiko: Am I ever so happy that I'm allowed to speak to Konohana. She always know how to solve these problems.

Voice: AIKO!!

VERY happy female, brown gerbil wearing an orange and yellow kimono rams into Aiko

Girl: Oh Aiko! I'm glad you've come again! Her eyes are heart shaped

Aiko: Ugh, Ayame i have no time for this. He walks away heading toward the castle

Ayame (girl): Dear me... I done it again. Oh well, I will win Aiko's heart one day! Becomes mad And I WILL beat Konohana to it!

We see Aiko inside the castle

Female gerbil: Hmm? See's Aiko Oh, Aiko! Your back!

Aiko: Bows down to her Greetings, Konohana!

Scene turns to them outside walking and talking

Konohana (female gerbil): So, the blade of stars is your family's harloom. And you won't accept it?

Aiko: Yeah, I don't care for a sword at all.

Konohana: Laughs

Aiko: What's so funny?

Konohana: Sorry, it's just. I'm surprised that someone won't care for the family harloom. It's just, you should care. Not many gerbils have a family harloom. You should be happy and feel luck that you have one. Sure, there might be no attacks here. But, you can never tell. You should atleast aceept it even if there will be no attacks.

Aiko: She's right. I should care for it no matter what. I only didn't cared for it because there is no attacks and I thought everyone had a family harloom....

End of chapter 1.

[InuYasha_Fan_Gurl]

Um intresting^-^

[Ethereal Blaze]

uh, yeah. u really like hamsters dontcha. i quite liked it. i like wierd stuf

[MewTaita]

Enter it in the Rising Stars Of Manga competition when your done! get all the info @[url]http://www.tokyopop.com/
lol you hamsters!