The cross

shinobi88 · Post by **shinobi88** » Jul 26, 2005 1:49am

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I'am finnshed with Chapter 3 of Episode II.

The Next Cahptet Chibi Usa is going to talk to Hotaru about the Kagewaki Legacy (Shikon Jewel). She's a spy at Omnicorp. While Kikiyo pays Setsuna and Rei a visit.

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Kikiyo faint at Hikawa Shirne where Rei Find her. Since she is at another time she is aging 50 years but slowly. Chibi Usa falls for Kohaku. Conan faces Lead Crow.

So what do you think?

darkearthgoddess · Post by **darkearthgoddess** » Jul 26, 2005 8:21am

Its alright I guess, and b/4 you publish this on the web, make sure you have the names spelled right, its Kikyo, not Kikiyo.

shinobi88 · Post by **shinobi88** » Jul 26, 2005 10:08am

darkearthgoddess wrote:Its alright I guess, and b/4 you publish this on the web, make sure you have the names spelled right, its Kikyo, not Kikiyo.

human error

Queen Serenity · Post by **Queen Serenity** » Jul 26, 2005 10:15am

Uh, shinobi-san, this is nothing against you or your stories, but you really ought to post these things in the "Fanfiction" forums. It just pushes back more contributing topics when you post these. Or, if you would prefer, make a thread called "Shinobi88's Fanfics" and post all your updates, questions and stuff there. If you haven't noticed, there are a lot of 2-reply threads that are about your fanfics. Just a suggestion.

shinobi88 · Post by **shinobi88** » Jul 26, 2005 11:11am

Queen Serenity wrote:Uh, shinobi-san, this is nothing against you or your stories, but you really ought to post these things in the "Fanfiction" forums. It just pushes back more contributing topics when you post these. Or, if you would prefer, make a thread called "Shinobi88's Fanfics" and post all your updates, questions and stuff there. If you haven't noticed, there are a lot of 2-reply threads that are about your fanfics. Just a suggestion.

Uh Sure why not....Serenity Hime

shinobi88 · Post by **shinobi88** » Jul 26, 2005 11:53am

The Units in my fanfic is The:

The Witches 5 Unit: Formerly worked In The Death Busters army. But after The Mugen High Incident. Each Witch was clone by the Crime Syndicate called the Black Organzation. They in Omnicorp

Night Shade · Post by **Night Shade** » Jul 26, 2005 1:30pm

Good, it reminds me of Metal Gear/Big o/ Batman/ Paycheck/ Splinter cell.

Is there othe Units in you Story?

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