those are wonderful.
i have paintings i want to show you. lol. i try drawing but i should stick to painting.
they are quite good. keep up the good work.
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I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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Awww common Locke! I've seen your stuff and they were great! Post 'em up will ya!? Or, you could pm me? Pwease? 
Thanks Mai! Ooo! Paintings?! I wanna see I wanna seeeee!!! Pretty please with a big red cherry and lots and lots and lots of cream on top?
Name: Sora
Race: Human/Demon?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000033.jpg
(At age 7)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000031.jpg
(At age 12)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000030.jpg
(At age 19)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000032.jpg
(Different Expressions)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... ssions.jpg
(Uhhh...this was supposed to be her outfit, but not so sure anymore...it looks hedious lol!)
Ummm, I'll post the story sometime tonight. lol, yes...I know, I'm lazy.
Uhhh, this one has nothing to do with the stuff above, hahaha I just thought I'd throw it in and the take a break from posting my art/crap/whatever. lol
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000029.jpg
Thanks Mai! Ooo! Paintings?! I wanna see I wanna seeeee!!! Pretty please with a big red cherry and lots and lots and lots of cream on top?
Name: Sora
Race: Human/Demon?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000033.jpg
(At age 7)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000031.jpg
(At age 12)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000030.jpg
(At age 19)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000032.jpg
(Different Expressions)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... ssions.jpg
(Uhhh...this was supposed to be her outfit, but not so sure anymore...it looks hedious lol!)
Ummm, I'll post the story sometime tonight. lol, yes...I know, I'm lazy.
Uhhh, this one has nothing to do with the stuff above, hahaha I just thought I'd throw it in and the take a break from posting my art/crap/whatever. lol
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000029.jpg
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Anner...you know our 2 special rules? Well, i've added rule 3. From here on in, it is illegal for the words 'crap' and Your/Anner/My(anything that indicates YOU)'art' to be within the same sentence....exceptions are if it's opposite day, or if you're saying, "My art is not crap it's the exact opposite" 
It was really cool to see how you could draw the same character in different expressions. I loved all of them!
She's pretty hot for a 12 year old... >_>
It was really cool to see how you could draw the same character in different expressions. I loved all of them!
She's pretty hot for a 12 year old... >_>
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Hahahaa, I'm sorry Locke, but rule three is way outta line!! lol You're way too nice Locke, you should roughen up a bit (with other people that is though, not with me, Heehee! I like you just the way you are, hahahaha, you flatter me!)
I'm gonna try and draw some more expressions of Sora, and maybe I'll draw her at 2 or 3 more different ages. I also need to draw her profile, and 3/4 and stuff.....I don't know if I'll be able to do it though. I drew all of those like....2-3 years ago....omg.....it's been so long...I didn't realize. Hahahaha just watch me draw a completely different girl lol.
P.S. So will I be able to read any of your new work soon?
I'm gonna try and draw some more expressions of Sora, and maybe I'll draw her at 2 or 3 more different ages. I also need to draw her profile, and 3/4 and stuff.....I don't know if I'll be able to do it though. I drew all of those like....2-3 years ago....omg.....it's been so long...I didn't realize. Hahahaha just watch me draw a completely different girl lol.
P.S. So will I be able to read any of your new work soon?
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I don't flatter you, I'm honest. You're too modest Anner. Quite frankly it's pissing me off! 
j/k.
And dont pretend you dont like it rough...>_>
Remember that time I told you the legs were too short? Huh? Huh?!! See. If there is something wrong with any of your drawings I say so.
I don't have any new work.
You're too modest Anner. Quite frankly it's pissing me off! j/k.And dont pretend you dont like it rough...>_>
Remember that time I told you the legs were too short? Huh? Huh?!! See. If there is something wrong with any of your drawings I say so.
I don't have any new work.
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Run Away Soldier
The rain washed away the pain,
You wanted to feel for so long.
You ran away from the falling diamonds.
But don't you know that you can't,
Escape the healing without a shield?
You have nothing with you,
You are naked.
And indeed you feel alone.
All the things you've done,
Don't matter none now.
You denied the feeling,
You denied the truth.
You denied everything,
Everything you held dear.
And now fall has fallen,
Winter has won.
Spring was spent,
And summer was summed up.
And now it's ecstasy's turn,
But you've lost your way.
And now you're like a lost soldier.
Searching for a hideout,
Forever...and ever....and.............ecstasy divined.
The rain washed away the pain,
You wanted to feel for so long.
You ran away from the falling diamonds.
But don't you know that you can't,
Escape the healing without a shield?
You have nothing with you,
You are naked.
And indeed you feel alone.
All the things you've done,
Don't matter none now.
You denied the feeling,
You denied the truth.
You denied everything,
Everything you held dear.
And now fall has fallen,
Winter has won.
Spring was spent,
And summer was summed up.
And now it's ecstasy's turn,
But you've lost your way.
And now you're like a lost soldier.
Searching for a hideout,
Forever...and ever....and.............ecstasy divined.
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Me like. I was waiting for some new work of yours today. I particularly liked the imagery of the 4 seasons in the middle there.
"And now fall has fallen,
Winter has won.
Spring was spent,
And summer was summed up."
-My only query was as to why you used a comma after each line that wasn't a full stop(or every second line). I found the pace(effect, significance) was kinda hard to discern. If you were more discriminate with their useage, then it would be easier to read(as in more fluent), and give certain parts more 'umph.' It almost feels as if you are stating each line separately. So it doesn't flow aswell as perhaps it could.
Of course maybe you wanted the same pace throughout, which can be a good effect(althought it makes it harder to read). That way the lines are meant to be punchy, so it's got a beat, lol. (I hope you can see the revolving-ness to what i am saying--[It's like a compromise I guess..])
. . .I'm not being very explicit, lol. I really liked this poem anner!
"And now fall has fallen,
Winter has won.
Spring was spent,
And summer was summed up."
-My only query was as to why you used a comma after each line that wasn't a full stop(or every second line). I found the pace(effect, significance) was kinda hard to discern. If you were more discriminate with their useage, then it would be easier to read(as in more fluent), and give certain parts more 'umph.' It almost feels as if you are stating each line separately. So it doesn't flow aswell as perhaps it could.
Of course maybe you wanted the same pace throughout, which can be a good effect(althought it makes it harder to read). That way the lines are meant to be punchy, so it's got a beat, lol. (I hope you can see the revolving-ness to what i am saying--[It's like a compromise I guess..])
. . .I'm not being very explicit, lol. I really liked this poem anner!
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The three days feels like three years...wth's going on? 
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my works are nothing like anner's but hopefully you guys will all like this one as much.
I wrote this from the heart. Its about what peoples pressures have affacted me and why i quite modeling...
Perfection, A deadly addiction.
"As I stand infront of you all.
I have a story to tell, one you may know or not at all."
With a shaky voice she gathered her strength to walk.
In her gown she moved the distance, she listened but no one dared to talk.
"I look back to my highschool years intertwined.
with one year, a specific day kept in mind."
As sge siid at the podium on graduation day
She wondered if thing shad to end this way.
"on this day, three years ago.
we all were freshman,wanting to learn things we thought we'd never know."
With a deep breath and a sigh of relief.
she watched those peole and with her eyes she told them this would be brief.
"Her name was marcia, the new girl those year years ago on that day.
She was beautiful but with a painful part to play."
Cherry pulled a picture from her gown.
lifted it for everyone to see then slowly set it down.
"on this day i wish to tell you what marcia told me:
'everyone tells me
to be beautiful i have to stay thin
and if i continue to starve myself
then in the end, perfection i will win'
Marcia was undoubtfully pressured to be perfected
and prom queen she was destined to be elected.
No one saw herreal beauty that lied in so deep, her core
they tohught modeling was all she was there for."
She stopped for a momment and looked to them all.
It was their fault her sacred beauty began to fall.
"All marcia wanted was to be happy and live.
Now she's gone, there's no way for her to forget and forgive"
She watches the faces of the people who hurt her and marcia so much.
her words havent reached their ears, didnt come close to touch.
"Is what Im saying merely words that do not faze your ears?
was her life unimportant so you could mock her tears?
Marcia faught an deadly addiction
Because you all made her feel to live she had to be the center of perfection."
Cherry closed her eyes and was slowly crying.
She too faught the deadly addiction, in which she was slowly dieing.
"Im sorry Marcia's life had to end yesterday.
And it seems mines going to end the same way."
With the last words she brushed back her long blonde hair.
Turned and walked away. wiped away her tears from her skin so beautiful, perfect[i/]and fair.
As cherry closed herself in her room tihnking of that dreadful day.
she was glad she waiting this long, till graduation day.
stripping of her gown and cap, and pulling on a dress of pink.
she grabbed a botle of pills,swallowed. poured some wine and began to drink.
writing down her last few words she tied a rope around her neck.
in the morning some one was surely going to check....
"On this day i have a few things to let you all know.
somethings cherry pressed but failed to show."
Josh, cherry's boyfriend of three years.
was not afraid to admit, and show his mournful tears.
"I loved her dearly and cant believe she's gone.
Just yesterday she told us of marcia but didnt live to see dawn.
Cherry has a note.she wished for me to tell you today.
In hopes that since you didnt hear her yesterday you'll understand her someday."
He took a deep breath and unfolded her note.
he looked at her neat handwriting and read what she wrote:
"To all those people who didnt hear me and thought i was merely a joke.
I hope your mind is drwoned in my words in which you soak.
Marcia was beautiful, and she had a dream to fulfill.
Since she died so young she didnt prepare a will.
Intead of giving away he possetions she gave away her life.
In order to forget her pain, hurt and strife.
So now you know im in my final bed.
Young beautiful but unmistakeably dead.
I question you now:
Now that Im gone am i perfect enough for you? Here it is. im in centerstage of perfection. My final act. And i take a bow."
>Love, Mai<
I wrote this from the heart. Its about what peoples pressures have affacted me and why i quite modeling...
Perfection, A deadly addiction.
"As I stand infront of you all.
I have a story to tell, one you may know or not at all."
With a shaky voice she gathered her strength to walk.
In her gown she moved the distance, she listened but no one dared to talk.
"I look back to my highschool years intertwined.
with one year, a specific day kept in mind."
As sge siid at the podium on graduation day
She wondered if thing shad to end this way.
"on this day, three years ago.
we all were freshman,wanting to learn things we thought we'd never know."
With a deep breath and a sigh of relief.
she watched those peole and with her eyes she told them this would be brief.
"Her name was marcia, the new girl those year years ago on that day.
She was beautiful but with a painful part to play."
Cherry pulled a picture from her gown.
lifted it for everyone to see then slowly set it down.
"on this day i wish to tell you what marcia told me:
'everyone tells me
to be beautiful i have to stay thin
and if i continue to starve myself
then in the end, perfection i will win'
Marcia was undoubtfully pressured to be perfected
and prom queen she was destined to be elected.
No one saw herreal beauty that lied in so deep, her core
they tohught modeling was all she was there for."
She stopped for a momment and looked to them all.
It was their fault her sacred beauty began to fall.
"All marcia wanted was to be happy and live.
Now she's gone, there's no way for her to forget and forgive"
She watches the faces of the people who hurt her and marcia so much.
her words havent reached their ears, didnt come close to touch.
"Is what Im saying merely words that do not faze your ears?
was her life unimportant so you could mock her tears?
Marcia faught an deadly addiction
Because you all made her feel to live she had to be the center of perfection."
Cherry closed her eyes and was slowly crying.
She too faught the deadly addiction, in which she was slowly dieing.
"Im sorry Marcia's life had to end yesterday.
And it seems mines going to end the same way."
With the last words she brushed back her long blonde hair.
Turned and walked away. wiped away her tears from her skin so beautiful, perfect[i/]and fair.
As cherry closed herself in her room tihnking of that dreadful day.
she was glad she waiting this long, till graduation day.
stripping of her gown and cap, and pulling on a dress of pink.
she grabbed a botle of pills,swallowed. poured some wine and began to drink.
writing down her last few words she tied a rope around her neck.
in the morning some one was surely going to check....
"On this day i have a few things to let you all know.
somethings cherry pressed but failed to show."
Josh, cherry's boyfriend of three years.
was not afraid to admit, and show his mournful tears.
"I loved her dearly and cant believe she's gone.
Just yesterday she told us of marcia but didnt live to see dawn.
Cherry has a note.she wished for me to tell you today.
In hopes that since you didnt hear her yesterday you'll understand her someday."
He took a deep breath and unfolded her note.
he looked at her neat handwriting and read what she wrote:
"To all those people who didnt hear me and thought i was merely a joke.
I hope your mind is drwoned in my words in which you soak.
Marcia was beautiful, and she had a dream to fulfill.
Since she died so young she didnt prepare a will.
Intead of giving away he possetions she gave away her life.
In order to forget her pain, hurt and strife.
So now you know im in my final bed.
Young beautiful but unmistakeably dead.
I question you now:
Now that Im gone am i perfect enough for you? Here it is. im in centerstage of perfection. My final act. And i take a bow."
>Love, Mai<
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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C'est magnifique, mon ami!!!!! ^_^ Great work, Ann3r and Mai!!!! *hugs*
As we burst into the room, the Count turned his face, and the hellish look
that I had heard described seemed to leap into it..... --Bram Stoker's Dracula
that I had heard described seemed to leap into it..... --Bram Stoker's Dracula
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Err, I'm sorry I haven't posted anything for a while.
Great poem Mai. I love your poems, they're so personal!
I'm sorry Locke, I'll be sure to post some new stuff just for you!
Thank you Vampire Hunter Amanda!! You're too kind! *hugs back*!
Umm...well don't have anything to post right now, I will later. I'll start with the story of my...uhh..character, Sora. yah! hahahahaha!
Great poem Mai. I love your poems, they're so personal!
I'm sorry Locke, I'll be sure to post some new stuff just for you!
Thank you Vampire Hunter Amanda!! You're too kind! *hugs back*!
Umm...well don't have anything to post right now, I will later. I'll start with the story of my...uhh..character, Sora. yah! hahahahaha!
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Stranger in the heart
There are so many things I could say
That would melt your body and soul.
So many words...
And yet none of them would mean a thing.
You will never see the shape of my heart.
Because every minute with you made me weaker.
As I listened to the radio,
The words in a song blinded me with truth:
"Looking back on the things I've done,
I was trying to be someone..."
And I realized that...I never knew you,
And if I see you now under the cruel sun,
I will think of you as a stranger.
You never surrendered your heart, body, or soul.
How could you ask me to feel,
Things you never showed?
...now...tell me once and for all,
.....did my car really get towed?
Alrighties...sooo, I kinda got some of the stuff in the poem from some of the old Backstreet Boys songs. And yah! They totally rock your pants off!! I love their old stuff! and you know you do too...you know you, and I know, and...umm...he knows..*points to a random guy*....oh and she knows too *points to a baby*. Hahahaha, anyway, so yah. I kinda wrote it just now, while listening to their songs, so it really doesn't make any sense, and I was basically just, copying the emotions from the songs. I did use some of the lyrics as well, like from, "Show me the meaning" and "Shape of my heart". And um...about the ending, I thought I needed to add something funny, just to brighten up the poem hahahaha! omg....that was...one loooong discription of such sucky poem. ahem, pardon me everyone! hahah!
P.S. oh oh oh!! And doesn't my out-of-this-world avatar rock both of your socks RIGHT off?! I aaaabsolutely love it!
There are so many things I could say
That would melt your body and soul.
So many words...
And yet none of them would mean a thing.
You will never see the shape of my heart.
Because every minute with you made me weaker.
As I listened to the radio,
The words in a song blinded me with truth:
"Looking back on the things I've done,
I was trying to be someone..."
And I realized that...I never knew you,
And if I see you now under the cruel sun,
I will think of you as a stranger.
You never surrendered your heart, body, or soul.
How could you ask me to feel,
Things you never showed?
...now...tell me once and for all,
.....did my car really get towed?
Alrighties...sooo, I kinda got some of the stuff in the poem from some of the old Backstreet Boys songs. And yah! They totally rock your pants off!! I love their old stuff! and you know you do too...you know you, and I know, and...umm...he knows..*points to a random guy*....oh and she knows too *points to a baby*. Hahahaha, anyway, so yah. I kinda wrote it just now, while listening to their songs, so it really doesn't make any sense, and I was basically just, copying the emotions from the songs. I did use some of the lyrics as well, like from, "Show me the meaning" and "Shape of my heart". And um...about the ending, I thought I needed to add something funny, just to brighten up the poem hahahaha! omg....that was...one loooong discription of such sucky poem. ahem, pardon me everyone! hahah!
P.S. oh oh oh!! And doesn't my out-of-this-world avatar rock both of your socks RIGHT off?! I aaaabsolutely love it!
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Knocked all three of mine off. 
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I dont think you got my joke, but I already took my shirt off in preparation before I read.
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...... ...... 
....!!!!!Wait a minute...was that a dirty joke?! 'Cause I think I JUST got it....
And I'm not a meanie Locke!! I might be the b word sometimes, but never a meanie. hahahahaha, kidding.
Hmmm....oh that's it!! No more internet for you young lady!! *slaps her own hand*...no wait, I don't think that's enough, *slaps herself in the face*.
That'll teach me to log on late at night even when I've a test the next day.... want to...log on...to...msn...but....shouldn't!!...Ahhhh!