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A poem by kamon

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Black-Harmonia
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Re: A poem by kamon

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Brilliance, simly brilliance!! =D> my favorite part was
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Wow. i loved it. it was realy awesome. and i bet thats why your a good song writer.
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Re: A poem by kamon

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Actually, I don't write songs.
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Re: A poem by kamon

Post by Coin~operated Boy<3 »

i thought it was awesome! I LOVED IT! :oops: :oops: :love: :love: :love: :love: it was so flowing and articulate. :mrgreen:
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Re: A poem by kamon

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I gotta say, its very good ^^

especially since you wrote about a very hard topic
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... Great Poem.... I Love it....
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Re: A poem by kamon

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the poem was wonderful. i loved every line of it. it was...excellent.
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Re: A poem by kamon

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Nice poem...you should start it with "April is the cruellest month" :lol:
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Re: A poem by kamon

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Excellent =D>
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that is a really good poem kamon, its hott!!
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Re: A poem by kamon

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Nice work! lol i love the-
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line, that was sweet. Keep it going! =D>
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Re: A poem by kamon

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That was a really cool poem...
It sets a very unique mood.
It's the perfect length too..
You did a really good job.
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That was a really cool poem...
It sets a very unique mood.
It's the perfect length too..
You did a really good job.
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Re: A poem by kamon

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I love it too ((excellent))
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Re: A poem by kamon

Post by Kall Drake »

wow, i like it
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Re: A poem by kamon

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Is everyone on this site in primary school?

Better than most of the crap that goes on this site but I don't believe the appreciation and comments in here are sincere. Your poem would be unworthy of any honest crowd, it needs improvement.
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