Would you care at all? A story made BY ME! its cpyrighted

[Emi]

How long it took to get to Hawaii. Christine and Lora just sat there, waiting for the 1st class jet to stop and to let them off. So it did. Lora looked up at the beautiful yellow orange sky while Christine says her thanks to the pilot. Christine hopped off the jet and stares at the sky as well. Her father was standing right next to the humongous limo and the driver. Lora runs over and shacks his shaken hand. Christine, who was now over to her father and Lora, said her hello to him with a lousy handshake.
“Christine I want you to met some of my students that are dying to see you.” Her father said greeting his daughter and Lora properly. Christine, after she was greeted by her father, had started to stare at her father for quite a couple minutes. He looked so nice in his tux. Christine had wondered why he was wearing his tux. Was he getting re-married? Had he not told her something she needed to know?
“Okay!” the girls had said while hopping into the limo. They drove off.
“The views are so magnificent” Christine said looking around. She grabbed her camera and started taking pictures of the wonderful views that she had looked at.
They finally reach the house which was a white two story house with a gigantic pool in the back of it. The front yard was landscaped perfectly and the grass was a dark shade of green. Trees and flower beds were bordering the house and the windows nicely cleaned. They got out of the limo. Christine, with her camera still in hand, walked towards the beginning of the long driveway.
“Holy crap it’s so pretty!” Lora said grabbing her camera out of her purse and started taking pictures. Christine’s father got out of the limo and directed them to the front gates. The butler comes out of the house and walks over to the limo to help the driver out with the suitcases the two girls packed. As they entered the gate, Christine looked over to see that a guy was sitting on the steps to the house. She stared at him for a moment and stared back to see that Lora had been watching her look at this mysterious guy. Christine’s father turned around as he watched the two girls talk about guys. He turned back around and smiled. He walked ahead and walked into the house.
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This is the first part of my story if you like it and you wish to rate it please do so. If you want me to post more of my story please tell me ^_^ thx

[Emi]

I may post new copies and such i hope you liked it ^_^

[Lance Crimson]

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[Emi]

They continued to talk for about three minutes and walked into the house.
“Dude he was so stinking hot!” Lora said. She looked at him one last time and then she shuts the door.
“I know! Wonder who he is.” Christine says looking out the window to see him still standing there. She backed away from the window.
“What happened? Let me see!” Lora goes up to the window and stares out of it. She backed up as well.
“Where he go?” Lora asked.
“Backyard.”
They run to the back door and walk outside.
“There.” Christine said pointing to him and watching him dive into the pool.
Christine walks back inside and shuts the door.
“Go talk to him Lora.”
Lora walks over to the pool and takes her shorts off. Her bathing suit was a light blue with sparkles. And it was pretty. She dived in as well.
Christine walks over to the couch and sits down.
“Ah. I wonder what they are talking about” Christine thought as she turned on the television.
She changed the channel and rolling her eyes to every station.
“Nothing good.” She says still changing the channel.
“AH! Here we go!” she says placing the remote on the glass coffee table. She shakes her head and puts her feet up on the table. The back door slides open.
“Hey Chi. Come out with us. The pool water is nice.” Lora says shutting the door behind her.
Lora puts her towel around herself and walks over to the couch and sits down next to Christine. “Please? You have to meet him! He is sooo nice and is really cute!”
“Well... I suppose.”
“Hurry up and get your butt outside!” Lora says shoving her towards the back door.
“Okay! Okay I’m going!’ They walk outside and Lora shuts the door behind them. Christine takes her shirt and shorts off and gets into the pool. Lora dives in and flings her damp hair back. She turns around to see Christine slowly getting out. The mysterious boy swims over to Christine and gently pulls her in. “Hey Christine how have you been? I’m Jeremy by the way.” He said placing her bottom on his knee and balancing both himself and her on one foot.
“I’ve been alright. It’s nice to meet you Jeremy.” She said with a sweet smile and a glance at Lora. She rolled her eyes and swam back and forth from left to right throughout the time Jeremy and Christine talked.

[Lance Crimson]

write more please

[Emi]

okie i will but i will have to post them Later

[Lance Crimson]

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