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A poem by kamon

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josh
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Re: A poem by kamon

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Thats Brilliant!! Great Work dude! i wish i was as great at writing as you!!
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Re: A poem by kamon

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That was great! The presentation, rhyme and use of words..everything was perfect for a poem of that length..

good work and continue writing! :D
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josh
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Re: A poem by kamon

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jimmyjohnjames wrote:Is everyone on this site in primary school?

Better than most of the crap that goes on this site but I don't believe the appreciation and comments in here are sincere. Your poem would be unworthy of any honest crowd, it needs improvement.
whos the troll :x
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