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Little Eyes, by DJ NINJA

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DJ ÑÎÑJÅ
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Little Eyes, by DJ NINJA

Post by DJ ÑÎÑJÅ »

Came to my mind, so I wrote it like at 3:00am last night.

Little Eyes

I see this little face
Starin' up at me,
I ask the Lord to help him,
And to support me

I just wanna curse!
My emotions in a black hearse
But at the same time I wanna cry,
Cuz I know there's a life hangin' on the line

I don't really know his origins
Where he came from
Does he share the same blood as me?
Or was he conceived in a downtown slum?
I dunno...but I wonder when I see those

Little eyes...
Little eyes...
Little eyes...
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Re: Little Eyes, by DJ NINJA

Post by Nyx »

Aw, baby. ^^

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Re: Little Eyes, by DJ NINJA

Post by Seras »

At first I saw a little child, perhaps a baby. It was dirty and someone was looking over the little child... then the image had sorta got fuzzy and then disappeared... all that remained was... the innocence of those little eyes, child eyes, to be exact.

That's waht I saw while reading this poem, no real hope, seemed like the world had gone bad and that everyone had to fend for themself.... I don't know what htis is supposed to truelly mean but.... That's what I saw and IT's really good besides that fuzzed part.
Now that I've settled down a bit, got knowledge of the land and have a routine set up I can finally get back to doing what I wanna do most... Can someone tell me what that is?
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Re: Little Eyes, by DJ NINJA

Post by Commander Sparx »

Thats ineresting Seras.

Thats good DJ ;D
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