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Emo Angle
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lost for words!

Post by Emo Angle »

Short Story!

Not long ago I wished I were gone with my mother and my father to a new world far away from here!
But now I must await there return to this world, and hope that I wouldn’t be lost for words like I was when they were going away.
My mother always used to say that I was great at speaking my mind, ever seance I was a child. Oh but how times fly, just before she left I was reading a story to her and my father and as I was nearing the end of my story that’s when they left, gone out of my life never to see them again till I they come back, hopefully!

Ever seance that day I could never speak, I don’t know why or how but I never stop talking till that day. I always had something to say, weather or not it meant something or not I always had something to say, but now I just cant get myself to speak, as if when my parents went away, my voice and my courage to speak out had gone with them!
josh
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Re: lost for words!

Post by josh »

This is dreadful. It is boring and riddled with spelling mistakes. I advise you to find a new hobby.
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Emo Angle
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Re: lost for words!

Post by Emo Angle »

now i didnt say this was my hobby,
i would never write this in a million years just ta let ya now!(im only liok 14)
i randomly wrote this from i book!
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Re: lost for words!

Post by josh »

Is this your story or not Emo Angle?

ps. Nice user name. Except I think you meant 'Angel'
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Master InuYasha
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Re: lost for words!

Post by Master InuYasha »

Emo Angel as I see it's that your not a very good speller. The poem was o.k
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Re: lost for words!

Post by josh :) »

Pokémon God wrote:Emo Angel as I see it's that your not a very good speller. The poem was o.k
oh be honest. The poem was great!
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