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Two Standing Inside One

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Demyx
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Two Standing Inside One

Post by Demyx »

One Soul
Two Shadows Cast
By Two Lights Divided
Two Blacknesses Combined
Into One Dark Hole

One Body
One Heart Beating
Two Beats Too Fast
As Fingers Twine
Hands
Palm to Palm

One Mind
No Track
A Dismantled Train
Dilipidated From Too Many Runs
Down a One Way Path
No More Paths
Lead to No More Ruin

One Body
One Mind
One Soul
But Two in Shadow
As Two Lights Cast
Two Dark Forms Come Together
Into One Black Hole
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~Zephyr~
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Re: Two Standing Inside One

Post by ~Zephyr~ »

wow! this is very good! i really like it!<333
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Re: Two Standing Inside One

Post by Demyx »

... you would.
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Re: Two Standing Inside One

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*Glomp-a teh Demy* AXEL LUV'S!
They live in you,They live in me. They're watching over,Everything we see. In every creature,In every star. In your reflection,They live in you"-Mufasa
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Re: Two Standing Inside One

Post by Mistrust »

*claps* very nice. Aww i can feel the hurt. If i'm right you are saying to people that are uncompelet yet still dark need each to become whole but still dark? So kinda like a heartless? I'm sorry but could you shread some light on what you were trying to get across.
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but if you don't water it everyday
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Re: Two Standing Inside One

Post by crystal.tears »

Oh, how cute~

Heh, kidding. It's nice. Can feel the emotion in it. I really like it, actually. That's something, coming from someone who no longer enjoys poetry.
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