Searching for the unknown (poem)

[scorpionwarrior]

I decided to try a new type of poem, not my usual random ones.
kinda started changing to the end, but meh, it was my first try at one of these.

SEARCHING FOR THE UNKNOWN

I search the streets for something,
something that i have no knowledge of yet,
yet if i find it,
it could leave me searching,
searching for this again,
again cause it's easily broken,
broken like a vase made of thin glass,
glass as fragile as a heart,
heart? is that what i'm searching for,
for something, someone,
someone that seeks my support,
support to help them up when they are down,
down from the worlds dread,
dread that breaks these hearts,
hearts that break in many ways,
ways that are undescribable,
undescribable to anyone,
anyone that has felt this feeling,
feeling of loneliness and sorrow,
sorrow for not seeing,
seeing the unknown,
unknown that is the MANY,
many feelings of the "heart".

[Fujiwara]

Woww, that was awesome!! I got goosebumps! Keep up the good work ^__^

[josh]

wat

[Biki]

i loved that poem scorpy. now i feel the need to read more of your poetry. GIVE ME MORE! >O >D

[scorpionwarrior]

thanks Fuji and Biki, and I'll try and make more poems Biki

[Biki]

yay. ^-^ this is the first one of yours ive read so far. must read more. >.> *goes looking*

[Fujiwara]

Yes, write more, scorpy. Write more

[Kibsy~]

=] wow scarpsy you have a talent for this... why haven't you been writing all the time...?

[scorpionwarrior]

Well as i said in the chat, got lazy but mostly needed Inspiration to start writing again, maybe i should make a collection of my poems that i've put on here, cause there are others from before i lost the net

[Biki]

go look for them. o.o

[scorpionwarrior]

I did, they got deleted, but I found some that I posted on my own site that I also posted here, and so they're already posted.

[Fujiwara]

Then write more? I'll be your muse ^^

[Hardcore]

I like it!


































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[scorpionwarrior]

Thanks and congrats Nelly. Also If anyone has any topics for some Poems for me, post them here or pm them to me.