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Some old poems I did

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scorpionwarrior
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Some old poems I did

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Kittens and Tigers.

Kittens are small,
tigers are big,
you can buy kittens at a mall,
and tigers are in circus gigs.

They are of the same family,
of that i'm sure,
they climb in trees,
the wild they endure.

Either way you see it,
they aren't that different,
they are both very fit,
and have the same shape foot prints.



The Dead Tree

On a hill,
there sits a tree,
it is bare,
oh can't you see.

Around it, is green and clean,
with grass & bushes & lots of stuff,
but not this tree,
is that enough?.

No, it isn't,
for this i say,
cause this isn't even,
on a display.

This tree shows grief,
for eyes can tell,
& our nose tells us,
that this tree smells bad.

The tree used to be,
by a shed,
but it got moved,
& now it's dead.



Personality (poem/quote)

You are the gas,
I am the flame,
Come near me,
And i'll blow you away.
"The world isn't perfect. But it's there for us, doing the best it can....that's what makes it so damn beautiful." - Roy Mustang

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Kaoru Hanabishi
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Re: Some old poems I did

Post by Kaoru Hanabishi »

i like it scorpio, you have short poem but yet they are very good at giving out the message across. I can see you can improve on them but I guess u did these with little time for joy of writting :D keep up the good work
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Biki
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Re: Some old poems I did

Post by Biki »

i like the dead tree and personality. :D
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