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Meh........bullshite son.

Something I wrote kinda like a story but eh.
Inspired by Pink Floyd: The trial

The dark room lights up. There is someone seen sitting down next to a large man with a white beard, as if somehow he looked ancient and mysterious. He is cloaked with a white robe along with his eyes as pure white snow, as if he can see into your soul and your fears. Someone else is seen standing before the cloaked large man. She looks as if it is a shadow. Lights can be seen hitting her at some places so you can catch a quick glimpse at her lips moving. The figure sitting next to the judge is motionless, as if it had no life or feelings whatsoever.
The lady presented in front of the large man speaks.


Jane: Anybody out there?

Jane: ......hear me now?

Jane: Excuse me for my rudeness, your honor but.........

Jane: .......can I speak for myself now?

Judge: Go ahead, I will allow this.

She fixes her glasses.
Jane: Thank you......now how can I imply all of what I am going to say.
Why do you do this my lady? How can you possibly allow this?........

Girl: ................

Jane: For if they hurt you why would you allow this tyranny to continue?

Girl: ................

She yells,
Jane: Please listen to me, don't do this to yourself.......stop it. [censored], why do you allow this damnit. Speak damnit!

Girl: .................

Jane: Don't you see the pain you have seen? From this impudent creature? Is there anybody in there?

Girl: ..................

Jane: Can you hear me anymore? Hello?

Girl: ....................

Jane: ............no more questions, your honor.

Judge: What say you, girl?

She is now gone.
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o.o i must admit i got lotsa lost reading this. o.o cant even say at which point even. >.> i guess between the intro thing and the speaking. >.>
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Wow. O.o me likes
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I get it! ...I think ^^ niiice just creepy and vague enough to draw my attention
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Very eerie. It probably helps to know the song though. :heh:
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........................song?o.o
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Pyro Psycho wrote: Inspired by Pink Floyd: The trial
"The reason I have such faith in God is because He showed me there is someone I could rely on once I lost faith in humanity."
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i disregarded that part all together. XD! never heard the song tho. >.>
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Sorry if it was hard to understand but if you saw it through my perspective I guess you would understand a whole lot ^^
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