me wrotey...

[Kaoru Hanabishi]

I wrote for aoi chan, 30mins job... so hope you all likey

My First Valentine

I’m lucky that you’re my valentine
I couldn’t think of someone else be mine
I think of you all the time
You are always on my mind

You wondered how you look tonight
I said you’re looking fine
And it was almost nine
I hope we can make it in time

First we went to dine
We got to the restaurant in time
People looked to my side
And thought she looked so divine

Late it was the night
Slowly walking under the moonlight
We sat and gazed at the night sky
Whispering our thoughts on our minds

You fell silently on my shoulder
Softly I cradle you asleep in my arms
Carrying you quietly back to mine
That was my first Valentine

[Aoi Sakuraba]

i love it, its cute. thanks hun 10/10

[Biki]

carried her back to yours? my my. i liked it, but she feel asleep in a restaurant?! :O

[Jade_Steel_Hawk]

Aww it's cute. ^^
Someone should write me a poem like that.

[Kaoru Hanabishi]

carried her back to yours? my my. i liked it, but she feel asleep in a restaurant?! :O

naw that part we left the restruant and went outside already biki sorry im not good at it

Aww it's cute. ^^
Someone should write me a poem like that.

im sure you got someone hiding around, or a phone book of guys waiting for u jadey

[Jade_Steel_Hawk]

A stalker?! Nooooo!!!!! XD

[Kaoru Hanabishi]

blah, your a pretty gal im sure u got a few genuine guys

[Hardcore]

I liked it Kaoru.
True love.

[Yuki~]

oh that's so cute ^^'
i wish i had someone to write things like this to me.. -__-'

[Commander Sparx]

Awww that is cute, it’s my first Valentine too. Nice poem, keep up thegood work.

[Biki]

carried her back to yours? my my. i liked it, but she feel asleep in a restaurant?! :O

naw that part we left the restruant and went outside already biki sorry im not good at it

nah. you're wonderful at it. ^-^ twas sweet.