One more time...

[kukutaru_ookami]

Something I came up with while walking to my eng. class

Wake up, eat...indulge silently
Head out to bitting cold burning heat...sugary praise
Once more to hail flood...frozen smiles
The yellow beast swallows all whole...head down
Wander aimlessly until a red door...mindless conversation
Swallowed once more by dull roar...less brain
Indulge silently, eat...sleep
...little less alive...creativity dying
wake up, eat...indulge silently...

[Athos.]

Candy?

[Jade_Steel_Hawk]

Yummm. How come you never talk to me any more, Nanaki? [-(

[kukutaru_ookami]

huh candy? maybe I'm not being clear enough?

[Jade_Steel_Hawk]

Haha. Maybe the 'Wake up, eat, indulge silently' part?

[kukutaru_ookami]

ahhh its basically a poem about the mindless tedious days of students that later turn into the lives of adults...so basically its a whole poem on how society is killing out-of-the-box thinking and promoting tedious mindless tasks....in other words slowly turning us into slaves...I'm not a conspiracy theorist ...you saw nothing!

[Biki]

ok i got none of that from the poem. XD!

[Jade_Steel_Hawk]

The 'less brain' part stuck out when i read it. That made me giggle.

[Biki]

upon another read i got some of what you were trying to say. gotta look beyond what you see. if thats not a quoted phrase im so taking it! >3 but i think its claimed.

[x_Saku_x]

That was pretty good.

[Coin~operated Boy<3]

lol its great.
annnnnnnnnd guys that do poetry have been known to be far cutter.

[kukutaru_ookami]

yay praise ^^..."cutter"(don't fix the error SC or this won't make sense) there's no bodies in my basement *shifty look*