XVI

[Cheshire Cat]

Zexion was walking down the halls of Castle Oblivion, showing his new pet cat around. “This is the kitchen and this is the Library…” he went on and on. The pink and purple Cheshire cat looked up at him from his spot in his master’s arms. Zex smiled and pet him slightly. “And this is Vexin’s lab. I don’t want you going in there…Ever.” The cat nodded as it looked at the huge door. It smelled funny to him. A lot like blood and pain. He decided that Zex was right and he shouldn’t go there. The Chilly Academic was walking out of his lab, wiping his hands on his jet black standard coat. “And what do you have there?” Vexin asked the smaller nobody as he plucked the kitty from Zexions’ arms. “Hey, give him back! He’s mine!” Zex frantically tried to reach the cat that Vexin was holding above his head. “Does Xemmy know about this?” He asked as he held the cat farther out of Zexions’ reach. “Yes! He said I could use a pet!” he tried to get his pet back. “I think I’ll take him, you know…to show him around” He went back into the lab “GIVE HIM BACK!” Zex yelled at the now closed and locked lab door. Vexin just laughed in response. Zexion thought a bit “If Xemmy knew…he’d make Vex give me back my kitty!” He ran off in search of the Superior.

Vexin set the Cheshire Cat down on a table “You are a pretty little thing, aren’t you?” He smiled and went to get some equipment. He wanted to do SOMETHING to this cat. Zexion didn’t see the potential this thing had. It could be a great nobody, a lesser of course but an excellent pawn for them. When he came back to the table, the cat was gone. “Where is that pesky thing?” he asked himself as he looked under tables and in carnets. The cat was slowly making his way to the door and was almost out when Vexin caught him.

[Goldenwolf]

You spelt Vexen wrong and Zexion is unrealistic. Demyx would be better suited to that type of behavior. But apart from that, its okay.

and why is it called sixteen?

[Cheshire Cat]

Well nugh! And its XVI cause that my number. And i used Zex cause Demy is using Demy.

[Goldenwolf]

Very well. It is a strange fantasy story, but i would read more of it. I still think Zex is still to childish in this though, maybe more Zexy?