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Cruelty on Animals (Poem and small rant)

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scorpionwarrior
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Cruelty on Animals (Poem and small rant)

Post by scorpionwarrior »

There's no point in crying,
they're only creatures,
They don't feel pain,
let's sell their features.

Not like they'll miss them,
our walls will look better,
A deer head above the fire place,
and a cows foot to stamp a letter.

Oh yeah, nearly forgot about the stuffed animals,
they'll make a great decoration for our lounge room,
Look at it's face,
makes you wonder what it was thinking minutes before doom.

Stop acting like an animal,
we're better than that,
We should never class ourselves,
as low as a rat.

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Truth is, we are animals. yet most of us seem to think we're higher than them, even though we have legs, arms, body organs and most importantly a brain and heart just like them. So why is it we make stuff out of them? Why is it we class ourselves higher? I could go on saying all these questions but really the only answer is cause they can't speak back. They say what separates us from animals is that we have the ability to reason. How do we know that though, does someone actually speak animal?

(Will continue on this later, for now. Say what you think)
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Evelyn
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Re: Cruelty on Animals (Poem and small rant)

Post by Evelyn »

Awhh. That's a good poem, Mat. ;_;
HELLO! Look at me. HELLO! I am so ZEN. This is BLOOD. This is NOTHING. Hello. Everything is nothing, and it’s so cool to be ENLIGHTENED. Like me.
scorpionwarrior
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Re: Cruelty on Animals (Poem and small rant)

Post by scorpionwarrior »

Thanks. Animal cruelty is one thing I cannot tolerate =|
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Re: Cruelty on Animals (Poem and small rant)

Post by The Rage »

Look at it's face,

Change "it's" (combo of "it" and "is") to "its"(form of possession)

Other than that, love it.

As for the bottom part, people even class themselves, some lower, others higher; sad, but true.

This would make for a good offtopic discussion.
Since when does something have to make sense to be logical?
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