Poem!!

[Angel of Music]

This was inspired by Phantom of the Opera:

Title:Deception

I hid in the shadows
I lied to her
Abusing her good faith
Pretending to be something I wasn't
I went past the point of no return
And tried to seduce her to follow
I brought her to a cold and dismal underground prison
I came to her in her dreams
Sang to her while she was sleeping
I betrayed her and she betrayed me in return

It's not that good, I know that. I tried to write it in a weird perspective.

Signed,
O.G.

[phantom]

i like it but you should make it like dr.sus phantom of the opra kind of thing to ad levady(jk) i like it
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The play’s the thing wherein I’ll catch the conscience of the king

hamlet

[Angel of Music]

Thanks, phantom.

[Cloud]

heres one i heard

Til the Day i die remember as the Wind blows by

[Angel of Music]

That's really deep. Where did you hear it from?

[Cloud]

really? Kenshin told me it

here is another one to ppl who cheats on there g/f(just saying)

Remember the girl u may her cry u will suffer til the day u die

[Angel of Music]

Oh, I know that one. I've had too many of those experiences and those who have inflicted sorrow upon me never forgot it.

[kukutaru_ookami]

I really enjoyed it it was a nice change of pace from the poems that are great but only deepen my self-remorse

[Angel of Music]

Why do you have self-remorse? Im glad you liked the poem, but Im sorry I made you feel bad about yourself more than you had already.