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Will Time Ever Die?

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Angel of Music
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Will Time Ever Die?

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Title:Will Time Ever Die?

Time is forever moving forward.
He is relentless, unfeeling.
We are driven mad by his very existence.
His presence is enough to cause the sanest person alive to lose his mind.
Why is he there, mocking us?
Why does he live on, while we all die?
Is there no way to stop his relentless ticking?
How could one be as cruel as he?
Has he no feelings for mortals, since he lives forever?
We must answer ourselves 'No'.
He cares nothing for us mortals.
We can not stop his forward movements,
No matter how hard we wish.
He mocks us because he is immortal.
The only questions we can't answer about him:
Why is he there, surveying us?
Will he ever die?

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Post by Angel of Music »

Does no one like it?
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re: Will Time Ever Die?

Post by Commander~Lightning~Spike »

It is a good poem :mrgreen:
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re: Will Time Ever Die?

Post by Angel of Music »

Thanks. I was beginning to think people had forgotten about me.:mrgreen:
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