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Museum of Mai's work
re: Museum of Mai's work
Im glad ya guys liked them. I'll be sure to post more of my work.
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
re: Museum of Mai's work
Tell me what ones you guys like!
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
re: Museum of Mai's work
With that First.
With that first pull
From this weed
It could make your senses dull
Making you think it’s everything you need
With that first snort
Of this cocaine
It could make your eyesight short
Making you go insane
With that first sip
Of this alcohol
It could make your voice slip
Making you loose control
With that first swallow
Of this ecstasy
It could make you feel hollow
Making you envision things, only you can see
With your last grasping breath
Don’t apologize to me
It was your fault you did crystal meth
Making you less than what you could be.
With that first pull
From this weed
It could make your senses dull
Making you think it’s everything you need
With that first snort
Of this cocaine
It could make your eyesight short
Making you go insane
With that first sip
Of this alcohol
It could make your voice slip
Making you loose control
With that first swallow
Of this ecstasy
It could make you feel hollow
Making you envision things, only you can see
With your last grasping breath
Don’t apologize to me
It was your fault you did crystal meth
Making you less than what you could be.
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
re: Museum of Mai's work
Absolute Anime
My name is Mai
And I love pie
My friend noodles87
Has a poodle living in heaven
Who was named ericdbz
That chased a cat up a tree
On cat got mad, and madder
Her name was Anner the mad hatter
This cat though she was king kong
Pounding on her chest, she sang a song
“Jingle bells,
Ender smells,
Kyle bloodheart laid an egg!
The Quaker Mobile,
Lost a wheel
And Darker angel got away! Hey!”
And Z34Lot died today.
Karis was a saleswoman
Who though she was a fan
And Micheal Jackson ate BEWD
In the end all the moderators went mad.
Because my spelling is THAT bad.
So now dark lilly who is the daughter of bob Marley.
Drove away on her harley
Yodama man followed her crying
“”please don’t leave! my heart is dieing!
I won’t have fun,
Without flirting with someone.”
So shaun laughed
And ate a map
Putting a book on his lap.
Wakai corrupt all the little children
And the webmaster became a hen.
So now im done with my poem
All aobut my friends, just because I love em!
hopes ya guys liked it!lol. 
My name is Mai
And I love pie
My friend noodles87
Has a poodle living in heaven
Who was named ericdbz
That chased a cat up a tree
On cat got mad, and madder
Her name was Anner the mad hatter
This cat though she was king kong
Pounding on her chest, she sang a song
“Jingle bells,
Ender smells,
Kyle bloodheart laid an egg!
The Quaker Mobile,
Lost a wheel
And Darker angel got away! Hey!”
And Z34Lot died today.
Karis was a saleswoman
Who though she was a fan
And Micheal Jackson ate BEWD
In the end all the moderators went mad.
Because my spelling is THAT bad.
So now dark lilly who is the daughter of bob Marley.
Drove away on her harley
Yodama man followed her crying
“”please don’t leave! my heart is dieing!
I won’t have fun,
Without flirting with someone.”
So shaun laughed
And ate a map
Putting a book on his lap.
Wakai corrupt all the little children
And the webmaster became a hen.
So now im done with my poem
All aobut my friends, just because I love em!
hopes ya guys liked it!lol. I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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blackrose_r7
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re: Museum of Mai's work
I liked both of them. But i liked the second one better. 
Someday... No matter how cold it is now... ...The snow will melt. Without fail. Whithout fail.-Hatori
re: Museum of Mai's work
I appreciate the compliments but i just want to know what the flaws ar ein my poetry.
anything ishould try and improve?
anything ishould try and improve?
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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Shining Star
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- Gender: Female
re: Museum of Mai's work
Hey you forgot about me!!!...no just kidding your poetry is awesome and you don't need improvement. I like them both.
God is love. Because the love that He provides us with is the greatest love of all. And it is because of Him that we are able to love others, since He loved us first.
If you want to know more just pm me.
He loves you despite what you might think.
If you want to know more just pm me.
He loves you despite what you might think.re: Museum of Mai's work
are ya sure they're okay? 
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.