Poems of any sort...

[crystal_tears]

Um, okay...
Anyways, I didn't write this poem, so it's nameless, but I really like this so I thought I'd put it up. It's from a video game called Baten Kaitos.
"Cast light upon the darkened Earth,
Save those lost in despair,
O' Mighty Ocean, guide us as we journey through,
The darkest pit of night...
May time, ever fleeting,
Forgive us, we who forsaken our song,
And buried our future...
Fare thee well, my children...
Rest in my heart...
Forever..."

[josh]

save those lost in despair....NEVER!!!!!!!


anyways..nice poem....

[crystal_tears]

Okay, this poem is kinda suckish. I just made it up like two minutes ago, so not a whole lot of effort went into it. And if it seems like a personal experience, it's not. I just suddenly thouhgt of one line, then the rest came.

Betrayed
"If you should die,
I'll be right there by your side.

If you should fall,
I'll lose it all.

If your soul wanders,
I'll wander with it.

If you are restless,
I'll be there to comfort you.

We are one,
You are Yin, and I am Yang.

If you die,
Then I die with you.

If you fall,
Then I fall with you.

If you're lost,
Then I'll help you find the way.

If you leave,
Then you'll be betrayed.

It is love,
Love that makes you wanna stay.

If you go to someone else,
Then I know that you can't love me.

If that is what you wish,
Then I'll leave you.

You'll be lonely,
And I'll be blue..."

So basically it's about how this girl is totally in love with this guy and she thinks he loves her too. But one day she sees him with another girl, so she leaves him, but is filled with sorrow.

[Guest]

wow!
That was really good! I enjoyed it!!

[crystal_tears]

I hate my poems, but here's some for you guys.

I'll Die
"You're the light that keeps me awake at night,
I can't live without you,
With you, I rise up and take flight,
I said I love you too,
But the moment I said that,
You stepped out and left me heart,
You said we'd never part,
But I guess that was just another one of your lies,
But without you, I'll cry,
Without you, I'll die,
I'll try to move on,
But like I said,
Without you, I'll die..."

I hate it. Here's another one.

No Love
"I wish I could have you to hold in my arms,
But seeing you over there,
With that girl, I couldn't even care,
I refused to love you,
And you refused to love me too,
I tried to hide my feelings for you,
But I failed with no avail,
When I first saw you, my eyes lit,
Without you, I'll throw a fit,
But then I remember that girl,
And I remember how much I hate you,
So then I just leave without saying good-bye,
You pretend you don't care,
But I know that you do,
But as long as you're with her,
I can't love you too."

I hate it, but what do you guys think?

[Guest]

I loved them!
Two excelent poems! Good job mate!

[crystal_tears]

This poem doesn't have a title, I can't think of one right now.

"That was eternal bliss,
When you gave me that kiss,
You said you woudn't miss,
But soon after, you gave another a kiss.

Why did you leave?
You said that you would stay,
You said you wouldn't play,
With anothers lips...

I can't believe you,
You need to wake up and get a clue,
That only a few,
Can be with me,
Only those that don't betray.

So I just gotta say,
It's a new day,
And it's a new me,
So just leave and see me play.

I wish things weren't like this,
I wish they weren't like this,
I can't wait to get revenge,
So that I can avenge,
All my past memories with freakin' you."

[~*Bleeding_rose*~]

Crystal_Tears.. Ur poems are so cool.. But it sumtimes make me sad..

[Blue-eyed Valon 2485]

I hate my poems, but here's some for you guys.

I'll Die
"You're the light that keeps me awake at night,
I can't live without you,
With you, I rise up and take flight,
I said I love you too,
But the moment I said that,
You stepped out and left me heart,
You said we'd never part,
But I guess that was just another one of your lies,
But without you, I'll cry,
Without you, I'll die,
I'll try to move on,
But like I said,
Without you, I'll die..."

I hate it. Here's another one.

No Love
"I wish I could have you to hold in my arms,
But seeing you over there,
With that girl, I couldn't even care,
I refused to love you,
And you refused to love me too,
I tried to hide my feelings for you,
But I failed with no avail,
When I first saw you, my eyes lit,
Without you, I'll throw a fit,
But then I remember that girl,
And I remember how much I hate you,
So then I just leave without saying good-bye,
You pretend you don't care,
But I know that you do,
But as long as you're with her,
I can't love you too."

I hate it, but what do you guys think?

Hooray "Claps loudly"

[Raoul Duke]

CT!! you just keep dishing out fantastic poems!!

[noodles87]

Must find my stash of poems...

[~*Bleeding_rose*~]

Do u spend all ur time thinking and writing peoms Crystal_Tears???

[crystal_tears]

*shrugs* i wrote four of my poems while i was supposed to be sleeping and two when i was in the car

[crystal_tears]

wrote this one a couple days ago

Silent
“You rushed up to me,
And placed your lips upon mine,
I was confused at first,
But then you gave me that line,
‘I love you,’ you said,
I didn’t know how to respond,
You passed out and I thought you were dead,
I was surprised for a while,
I just stood there as someone called 911,
I began to ease up and then I started to smile,
No longer was I stunned,
But then I saw you,
On that stretcher,
And they said you had died,
I couldn’t respond,
I returned to being silent,
And never again did I speak,
I soon grew fragile and weak,
When people saw me, they usually let out a shriek,
But I didn’t care,
‘Cause I finally realize that I love you too,
And now my chance to tell you has died,
As I just cried,
Doing nothing,
But being silent…”

ill try to make a happier poem later, but i usually get inspiration for sad poems

[crystal_tears]

i wrote this a couple minutes ago

Eternal Bliss
“I’ve always wished that you loved me,
And now my wish has come true,
It’s always me and you,
And no one else,
That makes me happy,
It’s eternal bliss,
Always being by your side,
No other girl could ever get you, no matter how hard they tried,
You don’t take advantage of me,
You’re different from most other guys,
You don’t tell lies,
You don’t make me cry,
You don’t make me wish that I could die,
I love you, and you love me,
You make me happier than any other girl,
You don’t make me wanna hurl,
You make me laugh,
And you say that’s the best sound ever,
You say that you’ll never leave,
And for once, I believe those words,
You say that I’m the only,
I say the same to you,
We kiss and embrace,
Never letting go, unless we wanna race,
You always beat me,
I always become disappointed in myself,
But then you give me those words of encouragement that no other man has ever said to me,
When I scrape my knee,
You kneel down and comfort me,
You’re the best thing that has ever happened to me,
So I’m never gonna let go,
Until the very end,
But we shall never truly be apart,
For our love can break through any barrier,
No other man could I do that with,
For you are special,
And I’m glad I found you,
And I’m sure that you’re glad too.”

wow, i actually wrote a happy poem

[noodles87]

Damn you are good sweety. My you would make a man very happy.