A poem by kamon

kamon · Post by **kamon** » Jul 29, 2005 10:42pm

The sky was red and the grass was blue, and I was there just loving you. Drugs and sex and battle scars, is all of it written in the stars? Are we just pawns in a game of chess. I love her more, she loves me less. Sex is good, sex is bad, those who can't decide are sad. Is it love or is it lust, should I believe in Faith and Trust? Pain is pleasure, pleasure is pain, ask me again and I'll go insane.

Bambi · Post by **Bambi** » Jul 29, 2005 10:56pm

Excellent

Tis very Kewl

Ethereal Blaze · Post by **Ethereal Blaze** » Jul 30, 2005 1:34am

really cool. keep em comin!

Motoko Chan · Post by **Motoko Chan** » Aug 01, 2005 2:26pm

that was cool!

vash the man-slayer · Post by **vash the man-slayer** » Aug 01, 2005 2:35pm

thats as sooo.....cool(exellent)

Karasu · Post by **Karasu** » Aug 01, 2005 3:22pm

^^ yay i finally got to reading it and it is exellent ^^ i would love to hear somemore of your work

Angel of Music · Post by **Angel of Music** » Aug 01, 2005 9:24pm

Excellent! Very good! Keep it up!

♥DIVA♥ · Post by **♥DIVA♥** » Aug 02, 2005 12:30am

i luv that poem soooooooooo much. i would love to see more of your work. i espesialy loved the last line.
"Pain is pleasure, pleasure is pain, ask me again and I'll go insane."
perfictly awsome i thought.

moop · Post by **moop** » Aug 05, 2005 2:36pm

Good.
I've been taught that poetry is the right words in the right order. And it seems you really thaught this thrugh

Neon_Genesis · Post by **Neon_Genesis** » Aug 05, 2005 5:59pm

I wish I could come up with that. Exellent work!

Mistress of Yaoi · Post by **Mistress of Yaoi** » Aug 11, 2005 11:56pm

A unique piece of work with a dash of darkness. hmm..... I like it

soulanubis666 · Post by **soulanubis666** » Aug 12, 2005 12:19am

...im not going 2 lie...u have a long ways 2 go but u do have the making of a very talented writer...

Water_Alchemist · Post by **Water_Alchemist** » Aug 18, 2005 9:16am

that was awsome i loved it((exelent))

Annaxubella · Post by **Annaxubella** » Aug 18, 2005 9:54am

That was a masterpiece. I love it
Express sex in a good and bad mood
Keep it up

Eiri Yuki · Post by **Eiri Yuki** » Aug 18, 2005 8:13pm

Nice rhyme scheme

Silver Sailor Orion · Post by **Silver Sailor Orion** » Aug 18, 2005 9:02pm

I LOVE IT!!!! all the sex-stuff in the poem is a big turn on too

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