My story

[Miroku_13]

as you all know i suk at writing stories and if you didnt well know you do,well i have a story due and heres the intro or plot and plz give me help if somethings wrong and if you think it suks plz say it i wont mind lol well here it is

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The year is 2140,and the world has been torn apart by a new nation called Turunia,which was ineaugrated 1 year before the start of the war,but in the war there spreads a rumor of kids who have the power to stop the war. There is a prophecy that was told 30 years before the war started from an old sage"4 kids will be born, into a place of misery and sorrow and they will have the power to stop what is coming."
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Char bios

Kokechi- Born in the year 2124,Kokechi is 16 years old,and is born in the nation of Japan.Her familly was killed when she was 13 and now she lives on the streets. She leaves japan on a frieghter when she hears that it will be bombed by another atomic bomb.

Xian- Born in the year 2126,Uniro is 18 years old,and is born in the nation of China. His mother was raped by the Turunia soldiers and was then brutally killed by them, Xian's father died 6 months after that from cancer.Now Xian wanders alone trying to find a place where he could get away since his whole life has been filled reptance.

Tasesia-Born in the year of 2125,Tasesia is 17 years old and is the 1st to the throne of Turunia,he doesnt beileve in the ways of his father and advisors.He is banished from his country and now walks alone trying to find atonement for his country and people


Adonia- Born in the year of 2124,Adonia is 16 years old, she didnt have any parents and was a slave to a wealthy man named Oughenia,but because of the abuse she had gotten, she left her master at night and has been traveling ever since.

[Ichigo]

hmm...pretty good...but write the story u just gave us the bios of the characters and how the story is going