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My World of poems

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wat do u think abut my poems?

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Angel_Eyes
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My World of poems

Post by Angel_Eyes »

this all are my own poems so tell me all wat u guys think ok :wink:

Day By Day
Day by Day,
Night by Night,
I think abut u!
The feeling that jst won't go,
Day By Day
Night By Night,
The thought abut u get's more intense,can't sleep
By knwing ur nt here,
get's me worried.
Day By Day,
Night By Night,
I jst wish there would be a Normal Day!
where ur there by my side,
smiling, walking by my side,
Which gives me the feelin that ur here with me,
so I would knw that every thing is fine.
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Wat can I do,
wat can I say,
how do i prove my luv to u?
u knw I luv u. But u show no feeling, as if u don't see the love.
why do u throw me a side,
let me show u hw much i love u .
give me a chance , So I can prove my Luv to u. I'll be there with u when u need me too.
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The Hope:
ur the hope that I hope For,
The goal that i Aim for,
The hope of seeing u someday,
A lil hope that u might like me bck,
The hope of Oneday sharing the nite with the bright stars looking upon us,
The Hope of seeing u infront of me,
The Hope of a grt journey.
The Hope of knowing ur here makes all the diffrence.
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re: My World of poems

Post by Angel_Eyes »

hhmm i guess no one likes them :?
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I enjoyed reading the last two poems Angel_Eyes. The first one had me lost for a minute but let me have another chance to read it again so my brain can translate it clearly :p
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The Realist wrote:I enjoyed reading the last two poems Angel_Eyes. The first one had me lost for a minute but let me have another chance to read it again so my brain can translate it clearly :p
alrite john sure :P :wink: atlest ur the first person to reply thanks men :P
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Angel_Eyes wrote:
The Realist wrote:I enjoyed reading the last two poems Angel_Eyes. The first one had me lost for a minute but let me have another chance to read it again so my brain can translate it clearly :p
alrite john sure :P :wink: atlest ur the first person to reply thanks men :P
No problem and I just read the first one again. It was good since I got it now lol. Good poems Gigi! We'll see more of them I bet you.
Anime is a way of life. But so is Reality and it hits harder.
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The Realist wrote:
Angel_Eyes wrote:
The Realist wrote:I enjoyed reading the last two poems Angel_Eyes. The first one had me lost for a minute but let me have another chance to read it again so my brain can translate it clearly :p
alrite john sure :P :wink: atlest ur the first person to reply thanks men :P
No problem and I just read the first one again. It was good since I got it now lol. Good poems Gigi! We'll see more of them I bet you.
yea u will dont worrie i'll them soon ok
anwyays tc i'm goin sleep nw tc john :wink:
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Angel_Eyes wrote: yea u will dont worrie i'll them soon ok
anwyays tc i'm goin sleep nw tc john :wink:
Alrighty! Good night and sleep tight Gigi. Cya tomorrow ;)
Anime is a way of life. But so is Reality and it hits harder.
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The Realist wrote:
Angel_Eyes wrote: yea u will dont worrie i'll them soon ok
anwyays tc i'm goin sleep nw tc john :wink:
Alrighty! Good night and sleep tight Gigi. Cya tomorrow ;)
i won't be here any time soon maybe on friday ok tc
sleep tight u too ok nite nite 8) :wink:
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re: My World of poems

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Hey its not bad at all, infact get some more together and post it all. :)
Can you find your name?
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Rahx wrote:Hey its not bad at all, infact get some more together and post it all. :)
lol thanks :mrgreen: i'll do that
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re: My World of poems

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ok here is one
a lil tear in my eye,
a lil pain in my heart,
And u say this is nothing for u!
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re: My World of poems

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I've been living in the dark for so long that I forgot about the light.
As if a storm has came and taken away all the happyness leaving only the sadness.
As I look through those stoned eyes
taht was once something soft and loving which now doesn't understand anything, but only tears taht drop out of these eyes.
So much pain, lonelyness with
no one to share this with, I try escaping but I'm only going in circles as if i can see the door but I'm getting farther and farther
away from it as the door is disapearing,
and again It's all Dark with no way out.
I'm sitting in the corner with the tears coming out of my stone eyes! My hands are turning into stone and so is my body. I cry for help!
Some one help me! Make me Escape this Darkness ad again be some one or something filled
with so much courage, happyness.
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