Poems of any sort...

[immortal angel]

thanx! your poems are good. not bad!

[tears_of_sorrow]

thanks EOD ^_^ yeah, i know my poems are sad, but thats what i usually think of *shrugs* your poems are good!!
i liked your poem too, angel of dreams
p.s. this is crystal_tears, i decided to change my name... wow, even my name is sad... lol

[immortal angel]

Here's one of my other poems (hope you like)

THE CHILD
Once there was a girl who thought that saddness and loneliness clung to her like puppet strings.
She wished that she could fly away to a place where a beautiful bird still sings.
She hated the dark clouds overhead,
She hated the bumps where she'd lay,
She pitied every blade of grass but wished that they would stay.
Then one day she let go of all the hurt and sad as night quickly neared.
She turned around and streached her arms and simply dissappeared.
The trees still hold the story,
The blades of grass still stir,
The wind will still whisper,
In memory of her.
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and tears_of_sorrow, don't think about the sad things in life. Think about the times you grew from your mistakes. (See my signature.)

[tears_of_sorrow]

great poem!
im not sad all the time, only somtimes, mostly when im writing poetry and junk *shrugs*

[tears_of_sorrow]

Unfair
“I’ve found the answer…
I now know why I can’t love…
It’s because I love another,
I loved someone else, without even knowing…
The signs, always showing…
It was obvious to everyone that he loved me,
Obvious to everyone that I loved him,
Obvious to everyone, but me…
It is unfair…
Everything is unfair…
Life is unfair…
How is it that I’m always left in the dark?
Especially when it comes to the matters of the heart,
I’m always clueless,
Even when it’s about me,
I never understand anything that’s happening,
Not even things in my heart,
It makes no sense,
Everyone else is happy,
Everyone else always knows,
But me,
Why is that?
Is it because I was meant to be miserable?
What is the answer?
One of my questions has been answered, but…
Many more are revealed,
Will I be forced to answer these questions the rest of my life?
My life is miserable enough,
Without all these questions buzzing around,
Must I face more misery?
More sorrow?
More unknown love that disappears the moment I learn of it?
That is unfair…
Everything is always unfair for me…
I want to be happy like everyone else…
But I can’t…
Why is life always so cruel and unforgiving?
Everyone else has no idea how my life is…
How miserable I am every waking second,
That my heart knows all, but my brain is always misled…
It is amazing how everyone thinks that they know me,
It is funny that they think I’m normal…
It is perplexing how no one can ever see, what’s really going on with me,
They think I’m cheerful, even though I look miserable,
For me, they think it’s normal…
How did that come to be?
Why does everyone think that when I’m looking miserable,
I’m actually happy?
They are wrong,
So very wrong,
It’s unfair,
Why did this cursed life choose me?
Why?
Why must I be miserable and always misled?
Why must I always be enshrouded by these miserable questions?
It is not fair…
It is never fair for me…
I wish that wasn’t so…
But it is…
And will be forever more,
I have nothing to do, but be miserable,
Until sweet Death comes for me,
I will wait for that moment forever,
I will cherish that moment when it comes…
I will finally be happy when Death comes…
The emotion I want…
Will come in time…
Will come when it thinks it’s time…
Will come when I can no longer hold my sanity…
And when it comes, nothing will be unfair anymore…
Everything will become clear…
My questions will be answered…
My heart and soul will be free…
Free of the misery…
When Death comes, things will be fair…”
What do you guys think?

[immortal angel]

long but good

[tears_of_sorrow]

thanks!

[tears_of_sorrow]

I wrote this a couple weeks ago.

Next Time...
“Our love could withstand anything,
That is, if you’re willing to sacrifice everything,
In exchange, we could be together,
Forever,
What are you willing to do to prove your love for me?
Would you be willing to give up your friends? Your family? Your life?
All in just a few seconds, as you watch them disappear?
You won’t be able to hear their voices,
Ever… again…
Are you willing to watch your life in this world disappear,
As if you were never even born?
Are you willing to do all that to save our love?
If you are, then you are foolish,
Your life is complete,
Your friends wish that we didn’t meet,
Because I’m no good for you,
I’ll destroy your life in the blink of an eye,
You won’t be able to laugh, to yell, or even to cry,
You’ll be emotionless if you come with me,
Do you really love me that much?
I ask you and you say ‘Yes,’
I say you’re a fool,
Nothing but a tool,
But you don’t care,
As long as you can be with me,
I tell you that you’re an idiot,
You just say to shut up and to take me with you,
I sigh,
I guess I’ll have to,
If you’re willing to give up your life for scum like me,
Then you must be miserable,
So off we go,
You look out the window as your friends and family being to disappear from sight,
I look at you as you bear tears,
I can’t help but pity you,
I ask you if you want to go back,
Before it’s too late,
You hide your tears and say no,
I yell at you, telling you that you’re a fool,
You simply say that you want to be with me forever,
I yell more and you cry more,
You continue to deny the truth that you want to stay,
I can’t bear to see you miserable like this,
I throw you overboard,
You scream and cry as you drift away in mid-air towards your life,
Towards your wonderful life,
And away from what could seem like pure Hell to you,
I cry a little, I curse a little,
But I know it’s for the best,
Because our love wouldn’t have meant anything if you were miserable,
I bear tears of sorrow as I wave you good-bye,
You land and walk towards the door,
You look up towards me and silently thank me,
Hoping that next time we meet,
It’ll work out,
I call you an idiot,
Saying that there’s no turning back,
You’ve made your decision to stay,
So we’re never gonna meet again,
You don’t believe me,
You refuse to believe me,
You just stand there, saying ‘Next time…’”

I don't really like it, but that's just my opinion.

[tears_of_sorrow]

I wrote this a couple minutes ago. It's konda like a sequel thingy to "Next Time..."

Coming Home
“As the days come to an end,
And the nights seem to grow longer,
I stare out at you,
Stare at you from a faraway place,
You don’t know where I have gone,
You wished that you had come with me,
As I stare at you,
I see that look of misery and bliss in your eyes,
You are happy that you’re with people, who you can call friends and family,
But sad that I’m not there too,
I’m amazed that you can be both happy and sad,
Sad and happy,
Maybe…
Maybe I should go to you,
So you won’t have to be sad at all…
I prepare to go,
But I’m stopped by my people,
They say that he should’ve come if he wanted do be with me,
To be with me always,
I struggle to be free of their grasp,
But I’m far too weak,
I frown,
I cry,
I silently walk back,
They all sigh and turn away,
But although they are stronger than me,
I’m much faster than they are,
I quickly run to my ship,
They yell to stop,
I don’t listen,
When you’re miserable,
I’m miserable too,
So I must go to you,
Before I change my mind,
I will…
I will live with you,
Never coming back,
Never coming back to the people who can’t understand,
I quickly arrive at your doorstep,
I gulp and sweat,
I start to knock on the door,
But I didn’t have to,
You opened the door, as if you knew I was coming,
You smile and quickly embrace me,
No longer are either of us miserable,
I’m away from those wretched people, who cannot understand,
And I am with the one I love,
All is well,
It is bliss,
To be with you,
To be with the one I love,
To be home,
To my real home…”

[immortal angel]

they're both long but really good! here's another one of mine.

LOVE FOREVER AND ALWAYS
This is meant to help you to remember that I love you, even when I cry,
To remember that I love you even when I say I wish that you would die,
To remember when I say I hate you and say I’ll run away,
Remember what I tell you each and every day.
I will love you always and forever, from the bottom of my heart,
I love you so much, especially when we’re apart.
So remember, every time there seems to be no hope,
And every time there seems to be no one to help you cope,
Just remember what you read today,
Here’s my love to take and keep and cherish in everyway.

[tears_of_sorrow]

nice poem!

[tears_of_sorrow]

I wrote this a copule minutes ago. This is one of the worst poems I've ever written, but whatever.

Leaving...
“I might not be here tomorrow,
Or the day after,
Of the day after that,
They are getting rid of it,
Tomorrow,
You won’t see me for much longer,
You might see me on Wednesday,
Or… perhaps Saturday,
Or maybe never again,
Nobody knows,
This might be my last message for a while,
And I’m hoping that you’ll miss me,
I wish this wasn’t so,
But it is,
And will be for many more years,
We might never meet again,
But I hope we will,
Because I love you all,
You are all so very dear to me,
They only give it to me when he comes,
Only when he comes, do I get it here,
And because of that,
Our connection will be weak,
We won’t see much of each other,
I will miss you all,
Until next time,
Though no one knows when that’ll be…
I’m hoping we’ll meet again soon,
Perhaps in a couple days…
Perhaps in a couple weeks…
Perhaps never…
I hope that you’ll forgive me for leaving,
But I won’t be gone for long,
At least… I hope not…
I want to be with you all,
Sometimes me friends and family don’t understand,
Anything about me…
Sometimes they don’t even know me,
But you all are different,
They are taking you all away,
They can be cruel,
So very cruel,
They don’t understand,
They don’t understand why I need you all,
They could never understand,
Never,
We might meet again soon,
And we might not,
I’m hoping we will,
I’m hoping our relationship won’t rot,
I’ll miss you all a lot,
But there’s nothing I can do,
So until next time,
When we should meet again,
I’ll see you in a while,
Until then, I’ll hardly even smile…”

This was inspired for something in my life, and blah, blah, blah... My parents are canceling the internet at my house tomorrow, cause they don't think I need it. They only have it when my brother comes home from college. So I can only post at my aunt's house now, and my cousin is always hogging it. And they'll only give me internet permenently, when they think I really need it, which will probably be for a couple more years.

[immortal angel]

nice poem and to bad your parents are canceling your interent. *miss you*

[Kamikaze]

If you would, allow me to post my poem:

Ice and Fire

My one and only
Why did you betray me?
How could you turn your back on all our years together?
Your ruby eyes glittered with malevolent glee
You cut out my heart, bloody and bleeding, and held it in your hand
The slicing of flesh, the severing of ties
Your sword carved a void in me, you killed me!
Once, twice, three times you squeezed the still animated heart
Blood spurts from its limp veins
Your laughter rings out, bouncing off the trees
Such a spiteful laugh that I shudder
The pain subsides as I die
My body falls forward, where it shall remain for eternity silently rotting
Yet, my soul with live on, still yearning for your touch
I will still crave the taste of your sweet lips, your body against mine
As I stare down at myself from the heavens, you start to cry
Was it all a mistake? Did you really wish for my death?
I observe you curse the world and plunge the sword deep into your chest, right where your heart resides
I cry out, shouting your name as your blood mixes with mine
Our love is mutual, it has survived through many hardships
I feel a light touch on my shoulder and whirl around to meet your gaze
A smile spreads across my lips as we embrace
We will be together now and forever

[immortal angel]

wow! deep! i like!

[tears_of_dreams]

angel of dreams: well actually my brother's canceling it from college, but he hasnt yet. but he will eventaully... my mom said hes gonna do it sometime today
Kamikaze: nice poem!