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ANGEL OF HELL
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can someone help me name my song?

Post by ANGEL OF HELL »

check out my song!

You’re hurting me but you don’t seem to care
Your turning me into the beast you shall really fear
I will avenge my family and everyone that I defeat
No need for sorrow arguing I shall kill you all

your paying for what you’ve done, your going down (you will suffer)
tonight shall be my last fall, my final dance has end (no one can save you)
you’ve torn my heart apart, feel it in my eyes
now there’s no turning back, this is your final lie

your turning back when you know this is going to be your last day
I can feel the raising of your hares
adrenalin pumps through my veins blood shall spill today
So keep the [censored] away from me and enjoy this sorrow graze

I can taste the blood, your going down (you will suffer)
tonight shall be my last fall, my final dance has end (no one can save you)
you’ve torn my heart apart, witness and feel it in my eyes
now there’s no turning back, this is your final lie

Run from me your going down (be afraid)
Your going to bleed tonight (it feels so right)
nothing will help you, seize the day (soon will be far away)
the light shines exposing your soul (you should have ran and hide)
your spirits dieng (voice is crying)
we where gone in the end sweet child well miss you
No, go far away, far away

you’ve torn my heart apart, witness and feel it in my eyes
now there’s no turning back, put faith in you for the last time
this day holds your last lie

coming my wat, the white light shines
took you down anyways

how was it? i also need a name for it!
"Somebody's been Funk'n with my Funk! Funk'n 'round Funk'n with it untill they Funk it up! (Don't Funk with my Funk!)" - Bootsy Collins and the RubberFans

Nyx is the wife, ya digg?
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ANGEL OF HELL
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re: can someone help me name my song?

Post by ANGEL OF HELL »

i need someone to read this and help me find a good name for this! any ideas?
"Somebody's been Funk'n with my Funk! Funk'n 'round Funk'n with it untill they Funk it up! (Don't Funk with my Funk!)" - Bootsy Collins and the RubberFans

Nyx is the wife, ya digg?
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Sasami Jurai
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re: can someone help me name my song?

Post by Sasami Jurai »

It's good. 8) Hmmmmm....what about "Fatal Avenge from Your Used"? :-"
Don't wake me; I plan on sleeping in
There is a light that never goes out~
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ANGEL OF HELL
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re: can someone help me name my song?

Post by ANGEL OF HELL »

hmmm i like those but i wanna see what othe rpeople think first
"Somebody's been Funk'n with my Funk! Funk'n 'round Funk'n with it untill they Funk it up! (Don't Funk with my Funk!)" - Bootsy Collins and the RubberFans

Nyx is the wife, ya digg?
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Post by Angel of Music »

That was really good. =D> I think AngelBlaze had a good idea for a title. My idea would be along the lines of "Your End, My Rebirth".
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Post by Sasami Jurai »

Angel of Music wrote:That was really good. =D> I think AngelBlaze had a good idea for a title. My idea would be along the lines of "Your End, My Rebirth".



That's good title. By the way, I love your avi!
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re: can someone help me name my song?

Post by I Am Kira! »

it would be easier if i knoew the beat,but good lyrics. how about u call it... Murderous Lies, or somethin like that
I will create an ideal world, where only those i deem worthy will live in peace. I will eliminate all the evil humans in this ruined world. if not me, then who else?
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