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Who is the most Evil person in history?

Atilla the Hun
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Gengis Kahn
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Hitler
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Saddam Husain/Osama bin ladin
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Chin Shiwongdi (the first emporer of China)
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Eternal/Ethreal

Post by Quavaquaculon »

Alrighty than...

This is an anime that i made up in my head. Tell me if its a good story. Or if it should be named Eternal or Ethreal

Story
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The setting is in Japan, on the island of Hokkido.
In a city called Milthea. All is good. Untill one day, there is a fire, a fire so huge that it burned for months. A boy named Kogu and his best friend Kaisu (or maybe Kaisudu, im not sure) barly escape. Kogu has lost his parents. And Kaisu lost his mom.

Fastforward about 4 years

Kaisu and Kogu are 14. They are legaly able to own their own houses. Kogu finds Utada, a girl that also fled and lost her parents. The first few episodes are just Kogu and Kaisu hanging out and fishing and things. A town meeting is called in New Milthea saying that their city was burned by another city. Dokimo. Kogu and Kaisu both want to get revenge on them. so they lie about their ages and become Milthean Lancers. Utada comes in shortly after that. She is a doctor in the army.

And Thus begins a great adventure as they get lost at sea after a Dokimian ambush. Eventually, they end up in Mongolia. Can they escape the barbaric Mongolians in time to defend Milthea?
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Wadaya tink?
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re: Eternal/Ethreal

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eternal :heh:
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thanks man, but what do u think of the story?
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good it has fire and mongolians what more do ya want
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Okay......

I know that u people like the story and stuff. But, COULD U PLEASE POST UR OPINIONS????? PLEASE IM DIEING OF SUSPENCE!
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re: Eternal/Ethreal

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Why isn't Nero on the list? He was one bad dude.
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Hitler. He ruined my countrys reputation.
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okay, if its regarding the poll, THAN JUST VOTE IN THE GODAMN THING!

what do u think aboot the story

AND WHO THE HELL IS NERO?
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i like ur siggy. read ur story later. g2g. sry.
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i dont think hitler was evil i think he was just nuts. :crazy: :crazy: :crazy:
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i like ur story. it was good to me. but what does ethreal mean?
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Ethreal macred i think. In Diablo 2, an Ethreal item is somthing that is powerful, but cant b repaired.
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