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Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

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Zeromancer's Angel
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Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

Post by Zeromancer's Angel »

Foster parent : by: lillith


I drown deep in my sea of loathing,
I’m drowning because of you.
Don’t you think it’s quite devoting?
All your wishes have come true.

You are deleterious to me,
Your love for me is a mystery.
You’ll make anyone go insane,
Always filling them with disdain.

You disconcert me,
You delirious, abusive fraud.
Your express antipathy,
You’re not in league with god.

If you’re the reason why I abscond,
What’s that suppose to mean.
We’ll never again share that special bond,
Guess all this wasn’t meant to be.

Last night you told me my mom had every right to give me up,
F.Y.I they took me away,
So now you know what’s up.

Should a parent tell a kid,
“ you disgust me, I can’t stand you,”
Should they call the kid “ a son of a [censored]”,
Does that sound right to you.


Would you believe,
That, that was said to me.
The situation happened over a frog,
Did I do anything wrong?

I took her container, yes , big deal yes stole,
You never said anything like that before when I was stealing,
This is getting old.
You say you’ll buy it back with my money,
I don’t care….go ahead,
It’s better if you use it honey,
Because by the time I use it I’ll be dead.

Either way, you had no right to say what you said to me.
Now because of you we’ll have to see,
How [censored] up my life is going to be.

When you scold your children,
You’re suppose to say something nice at first.
If you yell and call them names,
You’ll only make them worse.



Here's a scene of life into one unruly poem ](*,)
" I have found my angel...sweeter than the darkness itself"
Zeromancer's Angel
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Re: Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

Post by Zeromancer's Angel »

anytime...plz
" I have found my angel...sweeter than the darkness itself"
Spetsnaz
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Re: Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

Post by Spetsnaz »

You just keep getting better with every poem =D> . keep it up!
I loves meh Bambi
HOT! handle with care

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Zeromancer's Angel
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Re: Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

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really? thankies... but you never know what he might have to say....
" I have found my angel...sweeter than the darkness itself"
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Re: Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

Post by Spetsnaz »

Demon_child wrote:really? thankies... but you never know what he might have to say....
"he"?
I loves meh Bambi
HOT! handle with care

Everyone has an enemy. It's why God gave us baseball bats. Well, He gave us trees, but we knew what He meant.
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Re: Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

Post by Zeromancer's Angel »

gravytrain...
" I have found my angel...sweeter than the darkness itself"
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Re: Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

Post by josh »

Not bad for a rookie
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Re: Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

Post by Zeromancer's Angel »

really :mrgreen:
" I have found my angel...sweeter than the darkness itself"
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Re: Foster parent>>> Lillith Hemlock

Post by Hobo_13 »

you so good its not even fair anymore...jk :mrgreen:
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