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WAKAI
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wakai's :angel of death

Post by WAKAI »

It was four,was early in the morning
at death knocked upon his door,
who is there?the sleeping one cried.
I am death,let me come inside
at once,the man began to shiver,
as one sweating in deadly fever,
He shouted to his sleeping wife,
dont let him take away my life.
please go away,O angel of death!
shouted the dying man sins
that now he regrets,shouted,
please dont take me,O angel of death
leave me alone am not ready yet.

I come not with my own desire.
Bewildered, the man began to cry,
O Angel I'm so afraid to die,
I'll give you gold and be your slave,
Don't send me to the unlit grave.


Why are you afraid! Tell me O man,
To die according to gods plan?
Come smile at me, do not be grim,
Be Happy to return to Him.


Father, mother, daughter or son.
I'm afraid this moment is your last,
Now be reminded, of your past,
I do understand your fears,
But it is now too late for tears.


Horses and cards were your leisure,
Money making was your pleasure.
You ate vitamins and grew more fat,
With the very sick, you never sat.
A pint of blood you never gave,
Which could a little baby save.
O Human, you have done enough wrong,
You bought good properties for a song.
When the farmers appealed to you,
You did not have mercy, this is true.
Paradise for you? I cannot tell,
Undoubtedly you will dwell in hell.
There is no time for you to repent,
I'll take your soul for which I am sent.
The ending however, is very sad,
Eventually the man got very mad,
With a cry, he jumped out of bed,
And suddenly, he fell down dead.





Reader! Take moral from here,
you never know, your end may be near

ps

change your living and make amends
or heaven, on your deeds depends
The Naturalist
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re: wakai's :angel of death

Post by The Naturalist »

Really good, I liked it. The whole Heaven and Hell aspect isnt my thing, tho.
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