A poem by kamon

[kamon]

Thanks for all your praise

[Mew Vanilla]

Soory I'm late kamon.That was Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Ice Angel]

That was excellent!! Its was a beautifully made poem!!

[SYL]

I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOUR POEM

its really good

[+-[YuuriXWolfram]-+]

that was really cool, nice and rhymie, rhymie poems r best ^^

[The Realist]

Not bad Kamon. Its got some true meaning to a few relationships that are based off of this. Makes you think if you want this or that in a relationship or do you want more then you can ask for to eventually lose that person you fell in love with.

Still, its good.

[Sasami Jurai]

Wow, how wonderful and unique your poem is! You're wonderfully talented. I love it, keep up the awesome work!!!!!!! ^_^

[ANGEL OF HELL]

THAT WAS A PICE OF [censored]! U WORTHLESS EXCUSE FOR A POET! WHY I OTTA-got ya! yeah it was preety good keep up da good work.

[josh]

THAT WAS A PICE OF s**t! U WORTHLESS EXCUSE FOR A POET! WHY I OTTA-got ya! yeah it was preety good keep up da good work.

ditto

[Hey]

Alright since you asked me for my honest opinion, I guess I'll have to hit you with the die-hard truth. lol, don't worry it's not so bad.

Overall, I thought the poem was great. You can see a hint of your style and the rhyming scheme is amazing (I rarely see rhyming I like, so that was cool).
However, when I read it I feel like you're just...trying to get too many thoughts across...and you're being too hasty. But that might just be me, since I like it when things are explained a little more thoroughly. And you seemed to be jumping from one idea to the next and then back to the old one. BUT then again, all of that kinda looks like...it could be your style, in which case I think is great since it shows your originality.

So yeah, awesome poem (and I love layout as well, very spunky).

[Inuyasha-sama]

EXCELLENT!

[Captain Corkscrew]

I liked it man^^ It was kinda hard for me to read at fist, but that's because I'mam borin' person that prefers thigns all stacked neatly row on row... lol It is really good though^^ I liked the flow, now if only you'd do more... I wanna read more... maybe... please... will you? Possibly...?

[Cybertron Norcinu]

Very good! Bravo, keep up the good work!

~Norcinu

[Nanashi]

That was good Kamon. I really want to see you do more, you got something good here. Peace out

[OniKira]

"The Sky is red the grass is blue...Love or lust, should i believe in faith or trust? pain is pleasure, pleasure is pain. ask me again, ill go insane."

i dont know if those are the exact words, but those are some of my favorite lines from the poem.

AWESOME JOB!

[Nathan~Chevalier]

I freaking Love It!!!!!! more, more, more