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Stick to your day job chimp! Uuuh, I mean, chump! :D
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It was.. alright, I s'pose..... I was totally messin'! You suck! Haha!
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That tooootally blew my mind. Can you please, love me?
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RedGenesis
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My demise

Post by RedGenesis »

this is a song I have been working on



I have a choice,I have a Decision,I can ignore the thought of Sincerity,And commit to the way of Impurity,I couldn't lie,I couldn't take any more steps forward,The Memory still sleeps in side

I can't continue to fight
Cause im just a stone right after you throw,Right after you go,Right after..You go
I want you to be there right after I go,Right after I go,Right after...I go

I can't changes the things I've done,A break to my heart,Brings me to my knees!!!Im sorry for,I'm still here,I'm still here for..For you

I can't continue to fight
Cause The sun never dies right after you throw,Right after you go,Right after..You go
I want you to be there right after I go,Right after I go,Right after...I go

In side,In side I break!I can't take the pieces and put them together,The pieces of my heart!!,lay scatterd throught my mind,I can't turn back the time,thats why I make these rymes.Because...Because It still pents in side,The pain I feel is real,I need someone to help me find...

I can't continue to fight
Cause it's the feeling right after you go,Right after you go,Right after..You go
I want you to be there right after I go,Right after I go,Right after...I go

I!CAN"T!GO!ON!THIS!WAY!,I miss you

:-({|=
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Post by Hey »

That was an awesome song RedGenesis, do you have the music notes and stuff written out too? 'Cause that'd be king awesome!
lol...errr..but...just one thing. Um, why exactly did you post it here? I have a strong feeling like it has nothing to do with me whatsoever, unless....for some strange reason this thread inspired you to write it? which again, I highly doubt lol.


oh oh oh! And one more thing, this might have been just a coincidence or you might have had the cap-lock on or something, but is there a reason why you have the words "Sincerity", "Impurity", and "Memory" start with capital letters? Hahahaha, just curious. I sometimes do that to exaggerate the words for myself, when they mean something to me, but like, I keep the meaning hidden at the same time. I don't know, well, whatever, if I sound crazy, I am crazy. lol

Anywho, awesome song. :mrgreen:
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re: Welcome to Anner's!

Post by Raoul Duke »

This thread should be re-named, 'the thread of creative excellence.' j/k. Nice work chaps!
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Post by Hey »

lol, sorry Locke, but the title stays as is. :mrgreen: I'm cool enough to handle it.

Anywho, here's another poem, it's another one of those "silly" poems.

P.S. it is 9:10 in the morning right now, and I'm at school. Physics starts at 9:30 and it's my first class......I really want to kill a random person right now...hmmm....I could kill the guy sitting across from me, but he's cute lol...uhhh okok, poem...right.


The Cheesecake

And they told me that it was real.
As real as anything can get.
I thought that it would be beautiful,
The reunion of it and I.
But I was wrong, for it was stale.
I took a bit, and I went pale.
It was creamy at first, and sweet.
But then the aftertaste took over.
I tried to breathe, and I tried to spit,
But the aftertaste would not quit.
I cursed the cake and stabbed it hard.
My fork went through, inside its flesh.
I stabbed it again, and again, and again.
Until it was dead, and bloody with cheese.
Suddenly I realized what I had done.
And a tear rolled down my cheek.
I had killed my one and only love.
And I had done it....without a glove.
I started to panick!
I started to whimper.
For my sister would be home,
Just in time to see the crime.
I picked up the cake and ran to the yard.
I buried it deep, and hid my crime.
I hurried home and cleaned up the blood.
and right at that moment, my sister came.
She looked inside the fridge and turned,
to look at me with teary eyes....

(uhhh, I gotta go to class, I'll finish it later. hehehehe)
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Post by Hey »

Drawings!!
Wooo!
These are old, and I mean OLD!!! but missed using our scanner so I decided to scan 'em! lol!

Anywho, here they are, I'd love to chat a little more, well not chat, more like rant lol, but I've gotta go.
So here they are!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000002.jpg
(hehehehe, I just LOVE the head)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000001.jpg
(I love drawing 80's style Anime, it's so much fun!)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000003.jpg
(chinese style baby!)

Anywho, off to bed!!
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re: Welcome to Anner's!

Post by Raoul Duke »

I want cake!

Those pictures are awesome! The head looks awesome and er...the second girl is HOT. So hot, i'd go as far as to say she's.

WARNING, BAD WORD! HIDE!Masturbation material.
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Post by Hey »

Hahahahaha! Thanks Locke...I think.... :?

Many of my drawings are totally out of porportion, and look...just....wrong. lol. But oh well, I like it when people criticize me, it'll help me improve my drawings. :mrgreen:

:::::WARNING!!::::: BORING MATERIAL AHEAD, IF WANT TO GO STRAIGHT TO THE DRAWINGS, SCROLL DOWN!! hehehehehe! :mrgreen:

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Annnywho, I scanned like...26 drawings!!! They're ALL old unfortunatly... The only new drawing I've posted was the one of "Anner The Mad Hatter".
Alright, now, I'll let you know a little something-something about me, and the way I draw.
The stuff I draw, are 90% originals, meaning, characters, etc. I made up. I think the reason why I do this is because I can't draw already-existing characters very well!!! lol! Except if I have something to draw from, then I can...kinda do it. but other than that, no. That's why I usually draw made-up characters. alright....nowww....umm....hmmm.... oh oh!!! I don't have the patience for coloring. lol, that's why they're all in black and white, plus, I like the back and white effect. hehehehe. okok, and....um....I like to try different styles of anime, I hate sticking to one style, it bores me. But I gotta say, that the 80's-90's style is by far my fave. ummm, I like all of the styles though to tell the truth. Ummm, I used to draw manga style like crazy, like you know? those...soft...and like....umm....silky-feelin' stuff? hahahaha, ummm yeah, I don't know what I'm talking about. umm....that's it I guess....you'll see what I mean about the styles.

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I'll be posting 5 drawings each day until they're done. And when they are, I'll scan another 20, and then start all over again. hmmm....is 5 too much? Why don't we make it three, they'll last longer that way. lol, I won't have to scan like crazy. :mrgreen:

Oh and also, as you'll see in a min, I leave a lot of my drawings unfinished (errr...get borred, move on to the next lol)


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000027.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000020.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 9a27eb.jpg
(I drew this off of an already existing picture on the net, I don't who it is...I really want to know though :-k , does anyone know?)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 7b1b6c.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000004.jpg


Alright, I decided to start with 5, from now on, it'll be 3. lol :mrgreen:
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re: Welcome to Anner's!

Post by Raoul Duke »

Brilliant.
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Post by Raoul Duke »

]If you post three, or even one of these a day, i'll no longer have a need for sex, because they make me mentally orgasm.
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Post by Hey »

Hahahahah!!! Thanks Locke :mrgreen: , you really are way too nice. Common dude! I know they're not that good! What should I improve??


http://photobucket.com/albums/v221/Anni ... de9712.jpg
(uhh.....Warning?:content might be offensive to some viewers..lol....a little bloody....lol....look at his boobies...they look like girl-boobies! LOL! Ahem, they're not suppose to be though...)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 73b773.jpg
(that's my sis...uhhh heheh this isn't anime...well.....I don't think it is, I tried to do a real life drawing sort of thing....lol, she's suppose to be listening to some funky musica! lol)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000023.jpg
(I absolutely love this drawing for some reason, I really need to finish it, lol....and I REALLY need to get rid of the stupid bird..lol :? Doesn't her face look cool with the black? Guess what I used!? An ordinary every-day pen!!! YES! THAT'S RIGHT! You won't believe the wonders they can draw!! I swear to god! They're like, the best! You can make lines and curves look so...fluffy and feather like! I love it! I don't need no fancy pens, when I've my Bic! lol!!!)
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re: Welcome to Anner's!

Post by Raoul Duke »

The only thing i thought you could improve, is the hand in the second picture. In the area where it touches her head and hair. I love the third one! Particularly the contrast of the face and hair, body etc.
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Post by Hey »

Thank you Locke! You see? That wasn't so bad now was it? lol, I'll change the positioning of her hand :mrgreen:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000018.jpg
(uuhhh...The girl who's standing looks a little weird with her arm over her head, I think I'll have to do something else with her hand. hahahaha. anywho, I hate people who smoke...well, not hate, but.....I do think they're stupid. lol, ONLY if they like...smoke 2 packs a day though, a few is ok. lol)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000010.jpg
(I am obsessed with pirates. lol, that's why all my drawings are like, "Captain" this, or "Captain" that. hahahahaha, annnywho....She looks saaaad....:( hehehehe)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000026.jpg
(This is the main character from FLCL, I think she's very pretty...what was her name.....?, Anywho, I didn't bother to draw her body, what you see, is all I drew lol. so don't scroll down, hahahaha)
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re: Welcome to Anner's!

Post by Pyro Psycho »

lol niche pics there anner! :mrgreen: I love em!
i told yuo about stares dog
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re: Welcome to Anner's!

Post by Hey »

Thank you Pyro_psyco666 :mrgreen: out of all the drawings you've seen, which one would you say is your favorite?

You too Locke :mrgreen: , do you have a favorite?




And now time for a poem!!



Bitter Candy Ain't Ma Thang, But I Want It Anyway

For days now, I've been longing.
To hold your face in my hungry hands.
To dance savagely with you, for you.
Nothing satisfies me anymore.
Nothing tempts me the way you do.
You're like candy, your ass so funky.
but you haunt me, and you'll pawn me.
My mother always said,
Too much candy, is never good for you.
But how can I resist, when you're a mix,
of sweet vanilla and sexy strawberries!
No one can resist.
No one will resist.
And now my teeth ache.
Curse your sweetness,
But I still want more,
my bitter candy,
even though you're not my thing.
Sugar, honey, sweety, baby,
My lovely bitter-sweet candy.



Hehehee, it's a silly-willy, it's not a serious one.lol
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Post by Pyro Psycho »

lol cool poem this one is my favorite.... =P~ its hot.....http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v221/ ... 000018.jpg
i told yuo about stares dog
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