the one (a poem 18+ version)

[Mistress of Yaoi]

The one

I lie awake at night staring at that cieling,
All I can think about is the one that hurt me,
The one that left this scar deep indside me,
I wish i could forget the kindness,
The warmth that took my innoscence,
And has now left me cold,
For then these memories would not be so painful,
Pain without these memories would it all just go away,
Thats what I think everytime I take a sip from my glass,
For you see I left my heart bleeding at his door.

[ANGEL OF HELL]

good! very good! kudos!

[kamon]

...dark, powerful, simply astounding. This an excellent piece of work. Tell me if you come up with anything else.

[♥DIVA♥]

kamon! *nuge* *nuge* you should put your work to the puplic too. ^_^

[♥DIVA♥]

oh sorry to be rude. i thought that its was increadibly sublime. great work

[kamon]

I have Karasu, it's been on there for about three days

[♥DIVA♥]

WHAT! where!!!

[soulanubis666]

nice work liz....