My poems (from rumors thread)

[Eiri Yuki]

Hey guys... i kinda wanted your opinions on the poems i wrote in. Well, here goes.

{The Realization-from Viel of Innocence}
Your mind has gone astray,
You now see the outside world,
Filled with evil.
So you tried get back your life.
You have removed the viel.
You want it back, but may never have it again.
The people you loved are the people you hate,
And you can never reverse the roles again.
You speak of wanting redemption,
You want to escape the pits of eternal dispair.
But your mind will never let you go.

{A New Prison}
You seep into my soul,
Baring all my sins.
you see my corruption
yet you accept me.
You open me,
allowing my tattered and frayed existence,
The ability to breath.
You have smashed my walls and let me loose, yet you keep me here,
enveloped in you heart.
You have freed me,
only to reprision my mind in your love.

{What is Love-A poem of Questions}
What is love?
A bountiful buffet,
Or a candlight dinner for two?
Can you share it,
or is it meant for someone special?
Do you treasure it?
Like a jade figure?
Do you spread it?
Like a spiders gleaming web?
But the real question is,
do you keep some for your self?
Do you remember to love the one who is you?
Or do you forget because of you need to give?