well for anyone who doesnt know what this would be about ill explain..freewrite is where you write about what is on your mind- its not a poem or a song,story..its basically emotions and you mind placed in here..some of its really emo or like death-for-freedom..but its not scary...i guess ill start with the first freewrite then..
~Freewrite~
walking back from prison today. seeing all those kids running, screaming making me go insane yelling irresponsibly. i ran inside- locked the door waited anciously for your arrival..just sitting there on the bathroom floor-listening intesly waiting for your pound steps up the stairs.watching warped images in my mind-as though created at the dawn of time. just about to spring alive- i cant control the urge to punch the wall-breaking things without control. what id take to keep me from lashing out. deppression turning me inside out.hoping for an injection to keep that "monster" undersize. I am a transformation- easily tempted. mortaly independent. escaping here would be torture to you, making it enjoyable for me. Now im finding that my breathe grows weak. i take time to breathe out fire- but not extinguishing the fear you have learned . as anticipation ha grown i learn to take hours and wisper my only request.hang your lies on a barbwire fence. making you see that i wont turn back- it wont happen ever again. i make a move to break your thread of deciete and mindless games. but when im through youll wish you were going to hell.
-basically its just writing your emotions out on a piece of pare (uin this case in the internet)..hope you guys can make use of it...toodles^^
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~Freewrite~
~Freewrite~
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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Raoul Duke
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Wow! Thats a really powerful way of conveying how you feel!
Im going to try it later on
Thanx for sharing this with us, and opening up a new door for me
Im going to try it later on
Thanx for sharing this with us, and opening up a new door for me
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your welcome id ill seeforth that my many friends who open their minds to their emotions join your siteDisciple_of_Malice wrote:Wow! Thats a really powerful way of conveying how you feel!
Im going to try it later on
Thanx for sharing this with us, and opening up a new door for me
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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Soul's Reflection
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I never thought of doing that before. Thanks, Mai Kujaku I'll try that tomorrow (I'm to lazy tonight)
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your welcome- its just a thing i do so that i dont have too much on my mind to ponder about...everyone should try it once and a while it can really help you in times of dispair or happiness.... i have anuzzer one...
~Freewrite~
Screaming seems to be your way out.yelling, complaining making me seem wrong. Yet although we may fight i know you think that everything will end up being alright. News flash! everything doesnt end happily ever after. you b**ch and moan, tell me to go live on my own. yet when i leave you call 5-o saying "my daugthers out there lost in the snow" all these years i livedin one pathetic twisted family. Everything happened to be devastating. Hearing you yell and attack me- made me turn away and prepare to follow.You just dont seem to know how your hurting me.You know i feel how shallow your insults are. the pain seems to hit me hard. Everyone thinks of me as the enemy. although i have no life you still seem to think i envy you. Its all familiar, the same shyt happens everyday. dont bother trying to convince me you'll always be there. Phsych odoesnt begin to explain your predictable rages. Mortifying eyes, how my friends look when you leave the wrong impression. You end up leaving shock and terror after every fight, but although this is gay my life is pretty safe. sometime soon we can all try and be a family
~Freewrite~
Screaming seems to be your way out.yelling, complaining making me seem wrong. Yet although we may fight i know you think that everything will end up being alright. News flash! everything doesnt end happily ever after. you b**ch and moan, tell me to go live on my own. yet when i leave you call 5-o saying "my daugthers out there lost in the snow" all these years i livedin one pathetic twisted family. Everything happened to be devastating. Hearing you yell and attack me- made me turn away and prepare to follow.You just dont seem to know how your hurting me.You know i feel how shallow your insults are. the pain seems to hit me hard. Everyone thinks of me as the enemy. although i have no life you still seem to think i envy you. Its all familiar, the same shyt happens everyday. dont bother trying to convince me you'll always be there. Phsych odoesnt begin to explain your predictable rages. Mortifying eyes, how my friends look when you leave the wrong impression. You end up leaving shock and terror after every fight, but although this is gay my life is pretty safe. sometime soon we can all try and be a family
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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*cough*
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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Raoul Duke
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re: ~Freewrite~
Wow! Another great free write, very expressive!
Im going to do my one of those later on tonight
Im going to do my one of those later on tonight
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good-theyll help you get rid of some memories..i know i feel like i have too many at times...post it on here if you wishDisciple_of_Malice wrote:Wow! Another great free write, very expressive!
Im going to do my one of those later on tonight
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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~*+Mistress Ishrialla+*~
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WOW, free writing, huh? so that's what it's called. yeah, I've done that before. write you're feelings down, right? I do that alot. I have writen things in poem format that express what I feel at the time. and yes, it does help relieve stress, anger and any other emotions. it's a very good way to relax you're self in my opinion. ^_^
those are very good Mai Kujaku, I am Inprest. ^_^
I'll put one up soon ^_^
(Say, should I post the one's I have already written? my poems and mini storys that express what I have felt so offten and so long.)
those are very good Mai Kujaku, I am Inprest. ^_^
I'll put one up soon ^_^
(Say, should I post the one's I have already written? my poems and mini storys that express what I have felt so offten and so long.)
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i didnt know this thread was still hwre. yes put them down if you wish. thank you for the compliment by the way. i have about 10 other postes with my poems please comment them also- id love to here what you think
~mai
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~*+Mistress Ishrialla+*~
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ok cool. do I post them in this topic or make a new one? just wanting to be sure ^_^
here's my Freewrite
~My Freewrite~
I lay in my bed as the sun peers in thru my window. I get ready for a new day and prepare myself for what I know will happen today.. The same thing that happens here everyday. Though we don't try to, we always have at least one fight. Big, medium or even small it's all the same. Things are fine and then someone says something to pi$$ off the other person and all hell breaks loose. I know I hate it when people fight, and yet I seem to fight the most. I try not to, I do, but never the less it happens anyways, I guess what are humans if they don't fight, right? How about worthless crap? If humans are made to fight, kill, scream and complain about everything, then I guess I wish I weren’t human. What would we be if not human? What could we do if not the things we do now? Those are two questions that I don't think 'anyone' has, or will ever have, the answers to. So here I am now, fighting again. I say the wrong thing the wrong way at the wrong time and the next thing I know I am being screamed at. So what is my solution? How about the not so good one that involves running away from home? I get so close and yet so far at the same time from leaving this hell zone... I get to the end, beginning, whatever you may want to call it- of the neighborhood and stare off into the distance as I think. "Do I really want to do this? Can I really leave and not look back? Of course not. Why? Because of two reasons. One: It may not seem it, but out there is really much worse then you're own fight-filled home. There’s so many worse things out there that I’m sure you already know of. Two: How can I leave the one's that have taught me so much in life? How can I leave the one's that have taught me to be both strong/tough and sweet/caring at the same time? Simple...I can't." so I just simply take a deep breath and return back to the place that is both my prison and home. Continuing to wonder if things will ever get better.... or worse then they are now.
(The reason I wrote all that in a sad depressing manner. is because I went through some of that again today. and that's how I feel about it.)
here's my Freewrite
~My Freewrite~
I lay in my bed as the sun peers in thru my window. I get ready for a new day and prepare myself for what I know will happen today.. The same thing that happens here everyday. Though we don't try to, we always have at least one fight. Big, medium or even small it's all the same. Things are fine and then someone says something to pi$$ off the other person and all hell breaks loose. I know I hate it when people fight, and yet I seem to fight the most. I try not to, I do, but never the less it happens anyways, I guess what are humans if they don't fight, right? How about worthless crap? If humans are made to fight, kill, scream and complain about everything, then I guess I wish I weren’t human. What would we be if not human? What could we do if not the things we do now? Those are two questions that I don't think 'anyone' has, or will ever have, the answers to. So here I am now, fighting again. I say the wrong thing the wrong way at the wrong time and the next thing I know I am being screamed at. So what is my solution? How about the not so good one that involves running away from home? I get so close and yet so far at the same time from leaving this hell zone... I get to the end, beginning, whatever you may want to call it- of the neighborhood and stare off into the distance as I think. "Do I really want to do this? Can I really leave and not look back? Of course not. Why? Because of two reasons. One: It may not seem it, but out there is really much worse then you're own fight-filled home. There’s so many worse things out there that I’m sure you already know of. Two: How can I leave the one's that have taught me so much in life? How can I leave the one's that have taught me to be both strong/tough and sweet/caring at the same time? Simple...I can't." so I just simply take a deep breath and return back to the place that is both my prison and home. Continuing to wonder if things will ever get better.... or worse then they are now.
(The reason I wrote all that in a sad depressing manner. is because I went through some of that again today. and that's how I feel about it.)
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i liked it- it was an inderect staement towards yourself wich made it the better. i have a billion- they take a while to type up though.
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~*+Mistress Ishrialla+*~
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thanks ^_^ and yeah, they do take a bit to type. lol.Mai Kujaku wrote:i liked it- it was an inderect staement towards yourself wich made it the better. i have a billion- they take a while to type up though.
(So post my poems that are written on emotions that i felt at the time-in this topic? or make a new topic intitled my poems?)
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welllll- you can post them in here, or you can make a topic called ~Poems from the heart~ (can name it nything you wish) and post yours there- that way they will be more directly towards you and your comments will be clearer.
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~*+Mistress Ishrialla+*~
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*Nods head* yeah, that makes sence. thanks ^_^ I'll go do that nowMai Kujaku wrote:welllll- you can post them in here, or you can make a topic called ~Poems from the heart~ (can name it nything you wish) and post yours there- that way they will be more directly towards you and your comments will be clearer.