Here's a poem i wrote..hope u like it..
Love..
What is it..?
Cause I've never felt..
Its true essence..
I mean
outside of the "support system"
Is there anyone..
in THIS world..
that can tell me what "true love" really means..
that is..if it exist...
Am I weak without it..?
Is it able to heal a heart
like mine..?
Hard and brittle..
cut, torn, repeatily sown
by false "pick-me-ups"..?
I doubt it..
But if you think you can...
prove me wrong..
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My poem
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Wonderful! 
Good Job lashun! Not a single Rhym! O.O
Good Job lashun! Not a single Rhym! O.OFirst one to complain, leaves with a blood stain.
They could care less as long as someone'll bleed.
I for one can see no blood.
They could care less as long as someone'll bleed.
I for one can see no blood.
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lol thanx!...i think 
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it is great but arnt the lines atleast supposed to be close to the same length??
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"There is a difference between wisdom and knowledge:
Knowledge is knowing a tomato is a fruit. Wisdom is being smart enough not to put tomato in a fruit salad." ;]
"There is a difference between wisdom and knowledge:
Knowledge is knowing a tomato is a fruit. Wisdom is being smart enough not to put tomato in a fruit salad." ;]
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Dude, its free style, There are no rules
First one to complain, leaves with a blood stain.
They could care less as long as someone'll bleed.
I for one can see no blood.
They could care less as long as someone'll bleed.
I for one can see no blood.
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Yea in freeverse its just like talking normally. No rhythm, no rhyme.
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yea
First one to complain, leaves with a blood stain.
They could care less as long as someone'll bleed.
I for one can see no blood.
They could care less as long as someone'll bleed.
I for one can see no blood.