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Biting Back Bile

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Kagetsuya
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Biting Back Bile

Post by Kagetsuya »

Fighting the lonliness,
resisting the pain.
Trying to fix the links
in life's binding chain.
Lighting a candle,
to block the invasion.
Hoping the flame will stop
my mind's poisonous pervasion.
Waiting for the end,
to go in my own style.
I silently type while
biting back my own bile.

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I don't feel its finished....so any comments would
And Goodness knows the Wicked's lives are lonely.
Goodness knows the Wicked die alone.
It just shows when you're Wicked you're left only on your own
highteckdudu
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Re: Biting Back Bile

Post by highteckdudu »

Seems sad. do you feel that way?
i tryed to see things from your point of view, but i can't seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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