Bright Light (poem)

[scorpionwarrior]

Bright Light

What is that light I see?,
all the way down there,
oh what can it be?,
the suspense I cannot bare.

It's brighter than bright,
as I can tell,
not like a light,
I want to yell.

What I do not understand,
is why there is nothing here,
I cannot see any land,
not even a sound in my ear.

Wait, oh can it be?,
that my fate has been woven,
this light can only mean,
I have died and gone to Heaven.

[ax_colleen]

Magnificent poem

[scorpionwarrior]

Thanks

[Neon_Genesis]

It could use a little more death and gore. Maby a little violent bondage scenes.

[Aoi Sakuraba]

I think it's wonderful Mat, good job

[Kaoru Hanabishi]

straight forward and short good work scorpio

[Kibsy~]

Great Work, Scarpsy ^__^

[scorpionwarrior]

Thanks Aoi, Kaoru and Kibs.

[Biki]

nice one scprpyz. ^-^