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jesus love poem

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she has the aroma of a flower
and is as slender as a stalk
she blooms in every season
and writes love notes with chalk
although the chalk can rub away
our love always stays :)
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I quite like it, the lines about the chalk where nice.

It seems this is pointed at some one, but who?
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thanks :)
and mystery girl :o
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Your Welcome.

A mystery girl that is cute.
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I didn't know you did poetry. :o
I like it. Very nice. :)
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It's to you Jade. :D
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:twitch:
"The reason I have such faith in God is because He showed me there is someone I could rely on once I lost faith in humanity."
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XD.
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Commander Sparx wrote:It's to you Jade. :D
how did u know :P
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Jesus Christ wrote:
Commander Sparx wrote:It's to you Jade. :D
how did u know :P

I guessed though the way you were acting.
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Very nice, 10/10 from me
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Jesus loves me, this I know for...he..told me so! Lol.
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some mystery :(

thanks scorps!:)
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Jesus a poet? I hear Judas Iscariot is a good beatboxer.
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yudas was a jerk
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love notes with chalk?! :O sweet. >]
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