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Should I write more? o.o

Yes (It's PERFECT the way it is! >3)
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No (It's TOO SHORT and doesn't include enough detail and such crap!)
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He Was...

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He Was...

He was....my everything
(fin 8))
~Biki 8)

(i think that about sums it up. i could have said so much more, but why bother when everything in my head and heart can be said in those few words? im still debating adding more. i shall leave it up to popular demand! =D! so tell me pplz, should i write more?o.o)
Last edited by Biki on Oct 22, 2007 8:47pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Hardcore »

Keep it the way it is. It must've took hours to think of that. XD
And yeah. That describes it well. :) Especially if you've felt that way. :D
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Re: He Was...

Post by Master InuYasha »

you messed up on the poll options. I believe its:

Yes (It's TOO SHORT and doesn't include enough detail and such crap!)

No (It's PERFECT the way it is! >3)
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ZOMG YOU'RE RIGHT! =O! ...how do i fix that? >.>
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Re: He Was...

Post by Master InuYasha »

You need to learn that on your own........lol
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Post by Cloud Leonhart »

Obey Your Pimp! >:O wrote:ZOMG YOU'RE RIGHT! =O! ...how do i fix that? >.>
Edit your post. XD
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Post by Master InuYasha »

You are correct! How do you know these things :?:
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i tried and it didnt work. cloud u so didnt even say nething about my four word poem! =O neither did u kid! >:O ;.;
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Re: He Was...

Post by Master InuYasha »

O.k here's my opinion it was o.k
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Post by Biki »

gud. now plz xplain ur opinion if u wudnt mind. ^-^
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Post by Gaming Goddess »

my favourite word in that is "was".
An ordinary girl, an ordinary waist; but ordinary's just not good enough today.
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Post by Master InuYasha »

It explains everything in 4 words thats awesome! Biki = Super Genius
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thanx kid. tho that doesnt back up ur opinion of, "it was ok". and nice one GG. no. hes not my everything nemore. he was tho. :( i miss him. :'(
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Post by Master InuYasha »

O.k I was joking about "it was o.k"
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Post by LiquidMist »

OMG! ITS...its...AWEsome! just like my frog poem...

<i>The frog is green
The frog can hop
Go froggie go!</i>

though...urs is more simpler xD
A world so far away
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i love it misty. :d 8) GO FROGGIE GO! >3 lol. but know what i like more? that avy. so nice. 8) "Attempting to give a damn...Unable to give a damn. Stopping. process failed. Damn not given." XD! so nice. 8)
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