The frog prince (my version)

[Motoko Chan]

One day,a frog watched a young girl play with a golden ball.In it's eyes,her beauty was reflected.Believe it or not,the people,whom had thought frogs to be foul creatures,were blissfully unaware that that frog was in fact the prince of a distant kingdome,not to far away from the place where the girl lived.The girl,completely unaware of the frog prince,continued to play with her ball.
But,like her mother had warned her,she lost her ball in the murky water of the frog's pond.The frog,who had witnessed this,spoke to her."Young fair maiden...I have seen what has happened.I will gladly retrieve your precious golden ball for you if you do one thing for me."The frog said.The young girl just looked at it."And what favor is that,vile swamp creature?"The young girl said,eager to get her ball back."I want you to bestow upon me a kiss to break the spell that was placed upon me.I am a prince from a kingdome not to far from here,and was put under a spell,and only a kiss from a beautiful young girl can break the spell."The frog said.
The young girl looked sick at the thought.She had heard of witchcraft,and despised it.Thinking quickly,she decided that she would take the ball and run as soon as it was back in her hands."Alright,Prince who's name I've yet to know."She said.With that,the frog's heart leapt.He jumped into the pond,and retrieved the golden ball with haste.He put the ball into her hands,and as soon as the young girl retrieved it,she ran.The frog prince was in a state of shock.And from that,he vowed never to love again.Though he did love the young fair maiden with such conviction,that he watched her every day...

Ten years passed,and the once young girl was a beatiful woman,with cream-white skin,lips as red as the finest cherries,and hair that shone in teh sunlight.In place of the ball was a suitor,whom she was going to marry at the harvest moon.The frog,still broken-hearted,vowed that he will become human by her kiss alone,and vowed that after he returned his humanity,then he would kill the one that stood in his way of becoming her husband,and make her a princess.
That night,he hopped up into the window of the young woman's room,and hopped to her bed.She lay there,like an angel,asleep in a blissful sleep.The frog sat on her chest,And eventually,his frog lips met her cherry-colored full lips.He turned back into a human.When he saw the suitor's hunting knife,he picked it up,getting ready to deliver a killing blow to the man's throat,but when she rolled over,and grasped him in her arms,he realized that it would not be right to deprive them of the bond they shared.So,with that,he left.But he never made as far as the woods before he collapsed in a puddle of blood.The once frog prince had been shot by an arrow...by the very woman he loved so deeply.For the fair maiden had arisen at his kiss only to watch him leave and follow him.And,thinking that he was a murderer,shot him down.And there he lied,alone,broken hearted,in a pool of his own blood,and took his last breath with the woman he loved so looking over him...

[Master InuYasha]

I feel bad for the prince. Good story!

[Motoko Chan]

Thank you.^^

[.hero]

:O

Just,

:O

That was... wow. Twist of fate. Didn't see that coming.

[Motoko Chan]

lol,thanks....I accually had that in my head for a while...now,time to put a dark twist on peter pan....

[The Rage]

Oh wow... Just like a classic fairytale... I'm speechless, which in your case is a good thing.