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Angel in my outstretched hand

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Angel in my outstretched hand

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Dear Angel in my outstretched hand
Who's saved me with her love divine
Who's beauty and grace both intertwined
Has stopped the wanderer's eye

Dear Angel in my loving arms
Who I swear will come no harm
The sands of time will never erase
This kiss that I have come to taste

Dear Angel of such euphoric bliss
Whom heaven does surely miss
Who's tender lips I long to kiss
I'll beat you bloody with my fist <--- couldn't think of anything else and I kept it for laughs

Dear Angel who I love so much
You having me shaking in your touch
Even miles apart I'll never fear
'cause in my heart you're always there


There we have it, love it or hate it. If you love it thanks if you hate it [censored] you =D
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Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

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:) I like it Neo. It's awesome I laughed at the bloody fist part though :D
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Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

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i like it is nice :D nice work
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Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

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I absolutely love it Andre. It's great 10/10 in my opinion. Makes my envy the person you wrote it about
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Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

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I like it. You must be bipolar for writing that. Hehe. :lol: =D>
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Genius. I loved it. <3
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Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

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Me likez very muchly.
I see a little silhouetto of a man...
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Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

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Very well written, even the fist part.

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Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

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Very nice :)
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Wow that was good, keep up the good work!
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Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

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very good ^^
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Re: Angel in my outstretched hand

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nothing but praise popz, nothing but praise. 8) :D
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