a bad story

[Ammy_chan_cute_puppy]

it has sucky ass gramer! its my first story!

A young girl stood in front of a blood soaked body, her curly
white hair flowed over her shoulders and her light blue dress blew from side
to side with the wind.
“Pitiful stinking mortals” she said with a low growl.
The girl turned around and looked up at a man with black hair and slightly red eyes.
He wore a black cloak with red clouds and stood tall.
“Miki are you ok?” Itachi asked her softly putting his hands on her shoulders bringing his face close to hers.
“Ye…yes I’m ok” she replied blushing slightly her eyes locking with his.
“That’s good” Itachi said then brought his lips to hers kissing her gently.
Miki closed her eye accepting the kiss but pulled back a bit.
“We should…get going; Pein will be waiting for us.” She said taking Itachis hand.
“Ya…he will” Itachi mumbled slightly then took her hand and started to walk forward looking down at her once I a while smiling.
For the first time Itachi was in love. The way his heart beat as her soft silk hands touched his skin and the way her gentle voice ran through his head consently.
Itachi stopped suddenly remembering something.
“[censored]! I forgot to get Kisame’s sword fixed!” he said slamming his fist into a tree.
Miki giggled and put a hand on his arm.
“Its ok im sure he wont remember, well not until we fight again” Miki said laughing.
Itachi sighed and started to walk again.
“Ya I’m sure he won’t remember…plus I can get it fixed by the next fight I’m sure of it”
Miki smiled and leaned her head on his side walking with him.
Moments past and not one of them spoke a word, just the sound of a light breeze past and the singing of birds could faintly be heard. Itachi stopped at a old brick building and turned to Miki.“Here we are…” he mumbled then pushed on the building where some bricks where popping out. A door opened slowly and stopped once it hit the bricks on the building.
Miki took Itachi’s hand and started to run down the steep hill like entrance of the hide out her hair blowing back. Itachi was pulled behind for a second and then cought up letting go of her hand.
“First one down has to wash madras Cloughs!” Itachi yelped in a girly way then sped up in front of her. Miki growled slightly then dashed towards him throwing herself to the end on the hill landing on all fours. She looked back to see itachi coming strait at her then ducked just as he jumped in the air and landed right beside her.
“damn you won again” Itachi grumbled with a sigh then held out his hand to her smiling softly.
“hehehe Its not my fault you cant keep up Itachi” Miki said taking his hand and stood up quikly. She turned to a table where Didara and Zetsu where sitting and smirked.
“Hello boys, how are you this fine day?” she asked taking a seat on a black and red chair with soft silk padding. Zetsu grumbled and closed his eyes laying his big head on the table in front of him.
“I’m so hungry! Why didn’t you get any food girl? That’s your job!” he spieled out quicker than her could eat his parents then grumbled more.
Miki growled more and picked up a big sharp edged rock tossing it up in the air and catching it with her other hand. “Oh ya!?” she said then grabbed zetsu’s cloak pulling him ferociously towards her. “Eat This Punk!” Miki yelled as she brought her hand back with the stone and jammed it in his face quick and hard making him gush blood all over her hands and the floor.
Miki let him go and watched him drop. Zetsu curled up blood running down his face and dripping on the floor rapidly.
“You little [censored]! You broke my nose!” he said screaming at her. Miki looked down at him her pupils getting small as she glared and bared her growing fangs.
“Why don’t you just keep your nose down to the ground where it belongs you little weed.” She growled her voise getting raspy with every word she spoke.Itachi gave a small sigh leaning on the wall behind him.
“Miki calm down he didn’t do anything to you” he spoke gently. Miki spun around her hair hitting her face.
“Don’t tell me what to do! Plus he called me a [censored]! I’m going to beat him till he cries!” she screamed almost crying herself. Miki turned back to Zetsu kicking him in the gut.
“You [censored]!” Miki yelled at the top of her lungs then kicked him again”
“Stop it Miki your going to kill him!” Itachi screamed grabbing her arms pinning he against the wall looking at her with is calm soft eyes. He let go of her arms putting his own hands on the wall, one hand on each side of her. He pushed the lower half of his body against hers and kissed her neck softly.
Itachi spoke softly in her ear. “I don’t want Pein to kill you” Miki looked at him then over at Didara who was sitting at the table taking sips of his tea and looking back at her and Itachi in a wired way. Didara had never seen Itachi act so nice, nor did miki and itachi act like this togeather. “I…” Itachi mumbled and looked at her calmly putting a hand on her cheek. “I love you Miki” he said speeking loud enough for Didara to hear.
“I know it might have seemed that I was messing with your mind for the longest time, but realy I do love you.” Itachi said still speaking loud enough for Didara to hear. Didaras eyes widened and he dropped his cup on the ground.
"I love you to" Miki said wraping her arms around him closing her eyes. Didara stood up and looked at Itachi surprised. “do you realy love this girl…are you willing to give up your life for her and forget about the group…are you going to forget about the group?” he asked itachi calmly. Itach shook his head “no I wont forget about the group…not at all, but miki is important to me and I don’t want to leave her either.” Itachi said calmly. “fine do as you wish…it concerns me not” Didara replied calmly walking away dragging Zetsu with him.
Miki turned to Itachi and smiled. “Are you ok? Itachi?” Miki asked him looking into his eyes softly. “Wha…what do you mean by “Are you ok?”” He said tilting his head to the side just slightly his eyebrow rose in question. Miki sighed dropping her head in shame, her hair going over her eyes just slightly. “Never mind…its fine” she replied bringing her head back up and moving her curly locks out of her face. Itachi took her hand gently and led her to a nearby room. Miki smiled softly as he took her hand and led her off with him, when they got to the room itachi opened the door letting her in first and going in after her. Itachi closed the door and led miki to the bed having her sit down on it.
“Miki…I want you to be mine…” he said leaning close to her still standing up. Miki blushed and put a hand on his chest. “its to embarrassing, with all the other men around….that is.” she said softly into his ear.
“no one will care…and plus this place is big enough so the wont hear you.” Itachi replied laying her down and getting on top of her

[Yami Haga-Ryuzaki]

...so this was a Naruto fanfiction story?

looks like the sorts of stories on Quizilla... xDD

[Ammy_chan_cute_puppy]

ya it is! ^.^'