whats wrong with this drawing please?

[Snowy]

the shading is crap i know, im talking about the drawing, i dont want to put clothes on her then have people complain the arm is too long (i already fixed that lol)

so er... oh yeah! shes naked at the moment n.n so careful n.n

[Koekiemonster]

i think the left leg should be 'turned' a bit so it is more in line with the knee.... if you know what i mean ... maybe it's just the shaded part.

[scorpionwarrior]

I would have to say, belly hole thingo is too big lol o.o. Maybe sharp edges need to be curved a bit in some places and face looks a bit uneven (deformed kinda). Other than that, I don't notice much else.

[Snowy]

the white cheekbone thingy?

LOL "belly hole thingo" awwwweome LOL


ty : )

(i see the edges, but the outline wont be there once the skin color is added )

[The Evil Russell Crowe]

Belly Button looks retarded.

[Snowy]

i love you! but focus on the drawing and not the shading n.n gaaaah

[Nyx]

She looks like she had a mini penis or a really large clit.

[Gaming Goddess]

Yeah, the belly button is really [censored] up. And she's not curvy at all. But I don't know if you were going for the ruler look or not

[Snowy]

ok i put some skin on her x.x

is that any better?


(for some reason that statement reminds me of Silence of the Lambs n.n put the lotion in the basket lol)

[Tyche]

Is it just me, or does her head look too small?

And she really doesn't have much hip to her.

[Cold Revolver]

She looks like she had a mini penis or a really large clit.

Look at you.. always thinking about party favors.. comes as no surprise really..


Anyways the drawing looks good, anatomy is there I suggest working on the face a bit, the head looks good. Your a pretty decent artist. =-]

[The Evil Russell Crowe]

Haha, I can see his dick.

[Snowy]

*dies* yeah ill work on the face

[Snowy]

i hope this is better n.n

[Snowy]

the face shading is messed up plz dont comment x.x i got it ^^

[The Evil Russell Crowe]

Kid, you're doin' fine.