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Nyx
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Comments and Constructive Crit. plz

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Tri-Edge
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Re: Comments and Constructive Crit. plz

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Uh...okay...
My name is Tri-Edge; father to a murdered son, husband to a murdered wife. I will have my revenge, in this life or the next.
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Aoi Sakuraba
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Re: Comments and Constructive Crit. plz

Post by Aoi Sakuraba »

My computer wont load the link :( sorry nyx
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Yuki~
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Re: Comments and Constructive Crit. plz

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It's biiig XDD
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Re: Comments and Constructive Crit. plz

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its too big for my mind to comprehend, and I have a short attention span so that doesn't help either.
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Tyche
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Re: Comments and Constructive Crit. plz

Post by Tyche »

Muahaha! You can't convince someone who already thinks this way! Muahahaha! :-"

Anyway, it's very good, but anyone who is highly religious will simply take offence when you talked about god and the religions of others. They'd say "Well, you're wrong. If they believed in God, they would get better. They don't, so they need to suffer until they see."

But it is true that America is SUPPOSED to be founded on freedom of choice, but shouldn't anyone who wants to die get to, according to this fact?

I honestly don't think euthinasia should be legal only for the terminally ill, but death itself should be a personal choice. Families and friends of said suicidal person, however, may disagree with me.
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