hope ya like it wat do ya think!!!!???
im bleeding and needing a hand of course no one is there to be of company.... ill just hang myself with these chains of misfortune, darkness that shrouds them, feeling of pain along with it......people around now trying to help me...........leave me alone!!!!!!!!! [censored] you all you all had your chance to help but now its too late i curse all of your souls to the dark abyss!!!!!!! teachers, parents, friend if thats what you want to call them dont understand a thing....they think that they know you but screw them they dont........im guessing i have my life to take........now with these chain of misfortune i wrap on my neck.......put the other end on the tree of sorrow..........what will they say when they think its ok to know me better till tommorrow.........hanging and sleeping forever in hell nevertheless i bleed in my head..........
my deep dark mind will not rest again..........
again and again......................
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Pyro Psycho
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i told yuo about stares dog
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Darker Angel
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re: bleeding mind
i like it ! its strong , deep , and powerful..
it expreses ur feelings in a true way without any sugar coating but saying it like it is . i lvu it ! i luv all ur poems !
it expreses ur feelings in a true way without any sugar coating but saying it like it is . i lvu it ! i luv all ur poems !
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re: bleeding mind
thank darker angel i love your poems more though..............
i told yuo about stares dog
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re: bleeding mind
I Likes ice cream and the poem aint to shabby either
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Pyro Psycho
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re: bleeding mind
It was pretty darn good!!! I read your other and I liked that one too!! Keep writing!!

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re: bleeding mind
yes i have to agree with everyone else....it was very good

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